I seem to see this everywhere, and it's quickly becoming a pet peeve:

It's "story ARC", not "story ARCH".

*Fervently hopes no one comes up with proof that both are acceptable*

I don't care how "special" your twin dragon OCs are; Kurama and Hiei are not "average, everyday" demons.

Oh, and good job making your title Japanese. Why not use the English translation instead of shoving two Japanese words together? It'll be just as, if not more, effective since people won't have to google the words you used. D:

EDIT: And, on another note, your OCs also have middle names? Why? I don't think the Japanese even use middle names. I hate that so many fanfic authors don't seem to grasp that.

Criminal Minds writer, may I have a word with you?

Spencer Reid. Have you heard of him? He's the resident genius and although he looks like your typical nerd, he can take a lot of shit. He's been tortured, for cryin' out loud. Therefore I am quite sure that there'd be no "tears forming in his eyes" just because Hotch accused him of doing something he didn't do. Even more so because the question was who put a stinky old sock into Hotch's lunch bag. But that's a different rant.

Recommending to actually watch the show you write about,

Ink



The Pit... what else can I say?


Edited because I should learn to check stuff before ranting.

In other words, if your going to make a story featuring a trial, get all the facts straight, or I will have to smack you with my Clue-by-4.