Current mood:

tired

The good the bad and the ugly

I just threw up the first sections of a new novel "Elundi" on my page and am looking for some feedback of the ruff first draft.  The good the bad and the ugly you will not hurt my feelings I promise there is nothing you can say about it that I have not already told myself.  Any help or support you can give me would be greatly loved.

http://www.elfwood.com/libr/j/s/jscott2/jscott2.html