Current mood:

optimistic

Seeking feedback on a novel
I have two chapters of a novel I am working on submitted to my gallery. I am seeking feedback, suggestions, criticisms, and any other sort of comment on it you wish to provide. It is a fantasy/sci-fi hybrid that mixes the two elements very well, so I have been told my numerous people over the years. You can find both chapters here: http://www.elfwood.com/libr/t/w/twiphoenix/tigerheart,_chapter_1__2.html.html

If you want to read and comment on my other works, feel free to. Though please do mind the dates that each piece is written. Older stuff generally isn't as good, and there's a number of 2004 works.

Gallery: http://www.elfwood.com/libr/t/w/twiphoenix/twiphoenix.html