evannichols ([info]evannichols) wrote in [info]eldritch_realm,
@ 2008-01-02 19:13:00
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Artist's Notes: Family Likeness
These are the notes for Comic #347 – Family Likeness
My original plan was a four-comic sequence, starting with the cliffhanger before the break, and finishing with a neat resolution on January 4th. When I sat down to finish scripting #347 and #348, however, it just wasn't working. The material I wrote was okay, but not satisfyingly funny.

I'd love to produce a guffaw-inducing, beverage-spewingly-hilarious comic every time. I think that's an unreasonably high goal. For one thing, advancing plot and developing characters sometimes constrains the humor factor. More importantly, I don't think it's realistic. For example, I'm a big fan of Dave Barry's humor column. He's written approximately a gazillion columns, and frankly, I haven't found each and every one of them funny. Most of them are, though, and many of them are very funny. But not all the stones have to be in the center of the house; they just need to cluster at the proper end of the sheet (Note to self: Nobody gets sports metaphors when they're about Curling).

It's probably better to describe it as a bell curve on the standard 10-point Humor Scale:
Humor Graph


The red curve above represents what I'm aiming for, counting all episodes created. I'd like comics to be at least amusing, but I recognize that some are funnier than the others. It's a win if the reader feels that the amusement value generally outweighs the effort to read the comics.

And the reason I bothered to explain all that is to say that I was finding the results for the comics I was developing in the "Droll to Amusing" range, but not much better. So I asked myself, what's the most bizarre thing the characters could do in this scenario?" I explored a couple ideas, but I found the pageant the most entertaining. I think I'll get to show how each character has their own twist on the experience, and if all goes well, the results should be funny.



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[info]enesvy
2008-01-03 05:54 pm UTC (link)
I like the direction you're going. :) Princess Sparkle is a ticking universe-ending time bomb if she doesn't get her way. They're going to have to save the world with a beauty pageant. I love it! And it gives Kari her first big gig as apprentice--seeing as Dr. E appears to be a wee bit out of his element. And, OMG, do we please get to see Trevor in a sparkly gown???!!

I think your instinct was right. Any Eater of All deserves more than a few episodes. :)

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[info]evannichols
2008-01-05 04:02 am UTC (link)
Yes, it would be a waste to have an Eater show up, and not make something of it. And sounds like having the It be a pageant was a good choice! :-)

Trevor + Sparkly Gown? Hmmmm. That does seem appropriate...

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Writer's block helper
[info]tyamat
2008-01-10 11:25 pm UTC (link)
Didn't there used to be a book of ideas for blocked writers? Like, if you were stuck, you could open the book to a page and stab your pen down into it and read "The heroine finds out she has a fatal disease," or "A long-lost brother shows up." Cheesy, yes, but a great way to shake you out of a stuck spot. I used to have a small block of styrofoam at my desk (previous job) that I made into a prioritization tool On each side I wrote something like "Write product specifications," "Check in on the Q.C. lab," "Kiss the USDC inspector's behind," and "Go home." Worked really well.

ZGTJ

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Re: Writer's block helper
[info]evannichols
2008-01-12 04:59 pm UTC (link)
There probably is such a book, but I'm not familiar with it. I wouldn't be surprised if there are websites and software packages that do such things now, as well.

I like your Prioritization Tool. Especially if there's a one in six chance of getting to go home. ;-)

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Re: Writer's block helper
[info]ldycharmne
2008-01-27 10:10 pm UTC (link)
I'd like to actually suggest the generators at Seventh Sanctum. This is a link to the "What-If-Inator" :
http://www.seventhsanctum.com/generate.php?Genname=whatif
Which comes up with cush lovely premises such as: What if: ...Beowuf was directly responsible for the invention of the automobile? or What If: ...Ernest Hemmingway had access to force fields?

Really, some interesting generators there for ALL sorts of things.

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