belmanoir ([info]belmanoir) wrote in [info]ds_snippets,
@ 2008-04-27 20:59:00
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Entry tags:amnesty 13, author: belmanoir, fandom: due south

Welcome, by belmanoir
Title: Welcome
Fandom and Pairing: Due South, Fraser/Vecchio pre-slash
Rating: PG
Length: 300 words
Prompt: aloud


"I told them the house got burglarized, okay? So don't say anything to contradict that impression. Ditto for mortgages."

It was the first time Fraser'd been over for dinner since the whole mess went down. Poor guy looked half-dead with nervousness, and Ray wanted to kill Victoria all over again because Fraser used to be better at hiding that stuff. Or else there was more of it to hide these days.

"All right, Ray." Then, more quietly, "You could have told them the truth."

Ray cycled through the nastiest reason he hadn't (I don't want to have to defend you to my family when I can barely defend you to myself) and the nicest (You got better shit to worry about than Ma bitching about her ugly-ass snowglobe. Look at you, you're limping, for Christ's sake) before settling on, "Yeah, well, I didn't feel like spending my evening listening to you apologize."

Fraser hadn't apologized to Ray, but he was pretty sure Ma would be another story.

Fraser bit his lip. "Perhaps it would be better--I'll go." He looked up at the house, and Ray didn't know what he was thinking but he knew it wasn't pretty.

And yeah, he still hated knowing that when the chips were down, he couldn't count on Fraser. But he hated that look on Fraser's face more. "It's still my house," he said. "And if a man can't invite his own best friend over to his own house, I don't know what the world's coming to."

For a second he thought Fraser would cry. He held his breath, because if Fraser cried Ray was gonna do something stupid. But thank God, Fraser just blinked hard and said, "Thank you."

For once Ray didn't try to brush it off or ignore it. "You're welcome."




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[info]r_vecchio
2008-04-28 05:30 am UTC (link)
Oh wow. That is so perfect. Ray's whole internal monologue thing just sounds so right. I want this to be canon! So bad. ♥

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:06 pm UTC (link)
thank you!!!!

if only wishing really hard could make things canon....SO MUCH WOULD BE DIFFERENT.

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[info]r_vecchio
2008-04-28 09:35 pm UTC (link)
*WISHES LIKE MAD*

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[info]snoopypez
2008-04-28 05:30 am UTC (link)
<333333333333 for this ALWAYS.

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:06 pm UTC (link)
:) thanks, jaime.

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[info]keerawa
2008-04-28 06:29 am UTC (link)
Oh, that's lovely. Perfectly in character, and great voice. There is real damage to their relationship, and he's still angry - but even so, Fraser is still his best friend, and making him feel better is the most important thing to Ray.

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! And yeah, I'm thinking this is the first time Ray's reaffirmed their bff-status since the whole mess went down too...it's possible Fraser was worried. Just a little.

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[info]mrs_laugh_track
2008-04-28 03:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh Ray.

And yeah, he still hated knowing that when the chips were down, he couldn't count on Fraser. But he hated that look on Fraser's face more.

♥♥ There really is nothing that Ray hates more then seeing Fraser unhappy.

This is wonderful.

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! There really isn't. Because, you know, Ray's the best friend in the whole world. Just putting that out there.

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[info]brigantine1
2008-04-28 05:24 pm UTC (link)
OMG! *flails* They needed this scene somewhere in the original series! I mean, the "Letting Go" episode is one of my favorites, but still, they needed this to make the arc complete. *clutches perfect RayV voice to bosom*

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:11 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thank you! I always wanted a little more closure for them than they got (making out optional but encouraged!), so I'm glad this worked for you.

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[info]catwalksalone
2008-04-28 06:04 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wow. This is so exactly how Ray would feel: angry, hurt, rejected, betrayed but still steadfast. I heart him and I heart you for writing him this way.

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:12 pm UTC (link)
VECCHIOOOOOO! <3 <3 <3

Um. My Vecchio love may be a little out of control at the moment.

Thank youuu!

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[info]tanisafan
2008-04-28 08:27 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, that's some pretty perfect RayV, right there. I'd like to be eloquent about it, but my fellow commenters are a lot better at it. Instead, I'll just sit here and beam at my screen for a while ♥ .

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-28 09:12 pm UTC (link)
Beaming is encouraged! Beaming makes the authors happy! <3

Thank you!!

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[info]mlyn
2008-04-29 06:07 am UTC (link)
Oh christ, they are a pair of woobies.

But this: And yeah, he still hated knowing that when the chips were down, he couldn't count on Fraser. That fucking slays me.

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-29 01:44 pm UTC (link)
thank you.

rayyyyy. <3

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[info]luzula
2008-04-29 06:01 pm UTC (link)
Wow, that is awesome, and so realistic.

And yeah, he still hated knowing that when the chips were down, he couldn't count on Fraser. But he hated that look on Fraser's face more.

Ouch, that's painful.

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[info]belmanoir
2008-04-29 06:04 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Yes, VS hurts me. Poor woobies.

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[info]0not_just_me0
2008-05-11 12:04 am UTC (link)
Always bugged me that we didn't see more of the fallout. This was a lovely piece...

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[info]belmanoir
2008-05-11 12:10 am UTC (link)
thank you!

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[info]plotbunniofdoom
2009-05-04 09:53 pm UTC (link)
Aw! Ray!

He really is &hearts .

Edited at 2009-05-04 09:53 pm UTC

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[info]belmanoir
2009-05-04 10:28 pm UTC (link)
thank you! isn't he just?

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[info]spuffyduds
2009-05-05 02:40 am UTC (link)
Oh, OW. Love Ray's most vicious response. In that "oh, my insides just fell out" kind of way. Whew.

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[info]belmanoir
2009-05-05 02:52 am UTC (link)
VS makes me love Vecchio SO MUCH. Because I mean we see what's going on with Fraser, but Vecchio doesn't. All he knows is that his best friend abandoned him for this horrible woman, and he is SO GOOD ABOUT IT. I mean, unless you think he secretly shot Fraser on purpose, which I don't, personally.

Um, which is my long-winded way of saying "thank you"? ♥

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