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Ray's Fingerprints Challenge ficlet: "Smeared" by belmanoir 
10th-May-2008 05:51 pm
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Title: Smeared
Author: [info]belmanoir
Pairing: Fraser/Vecchio pre-slash
Rating: PG
Word Count: 233
Prompt: 27. the ceiling
Notes: beta'd by [info]snoopypez.
Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine and I am making no money off this.


One day while Benny's sleeping and Ray's at the precinct pretending he's working, he goes into the evidence room and looks at the fingerprints they found in Fraser's apartment. Page after page of his prints, dirty smears across Fraser's neat apartment to match the red smear on Fraser's perfect back.

They're all labeled. "Interior doorknob," "dog food bowl; sides and bottom," "windowsill #1A; 2 inches from left," "ceiling, kitchen area"--ceiling? How the hell did he get fingerprints on Benny's ceiling? They dusted the ceiling? Guess Welsh really did pull some strings, get this made top priority.

While he's driving home he remembers. He was making spaghetti sauce. He stood on a chair and touched his fingertips to the ceiling for balance while he peered into the top shelves of Benny's cabinets, trying to find a whisk. In the end he gave up and used the wooden spoon. He complained the whole time but--he was happy. He looked at Benny, who was talking about traditional Inuit cooking implements, and just felt this contentment. It seems like forever ago.

It's not until he gets to his house to change his clothes and sees the cleaning crew he hired, working their asses off for the third day in a row, that he realizes Benny's fingerprints are smeared over every inch of his place too. For some weird reason, that actually makes him feel better.
Comments 
11th-May-2008 01:46 am (UTC)
*sniffs* Parallel fingerprints.
11th-May-2008 04:16 am (UTC)
awww. BOYS.
11th-May-2008 02:32 am (UTC)
Awwwwww! I love this. ♥♥♥
11th-May-2008 04:15 am (UTC)
thank you!!! <3
11th-May-2008 04:31 am (UTC)
How the hell did he get fingerprints on Benny's ceiling? They dusted the ceiling?

My favourite line. I love both parts of it.

I also love the image of Ray standing on the chair, complaining, while Fraser regales him with tales of Inuit cooking utensils. And probably appreciates the view.
12th-May-2008 01:55 am (UTC)
Aw, yes! Fraser very strategically placed himself where he would have the best view of Ray's ass. And then yelled at Dief for calling him on it.
11th-May-2008 04:41 am (UTC)
He looked at Benny, who was talking about traditional Inuit cooking implements, and just felt this contentment. It seems like forever ago.

♥♥♥ And aw, because during the whole shit storm that was Victoria's Secret contentment would seem like a whole world away. And RAY, because the end is so sweet.
12th-May-2008 01:56 am (UTC)
And aw, because during the whole shit storm that was Victoria's Secret contentment would seem like a whole world away.

YES. Exactly. Ray feels like he is never going to be happy again. ::pushes remote hug button::
11th-May-2008 04:45 am (UTC)
Awwwww... Poor Ray.

I love the scene of domestic contentment.
12th-May-2008 01:57 am (UTC)
they are so freaking cute together. seriously i would pay actual money to just watch them cook dinner.
11th-May-2008 09:27 am (UTC)
<333333333333333333333

(heart.)
12th-May-2008 01:57 am (UTC)
::beams::
11th-May-2008 09:07 pm (UTC)
AWWWW...
How the hell did he get fingerprints on Benny's ceiling? They dusted the ceiling?
I can so totally hear Ray's voice saying this in my head!
12th-May-2008 01:57 am (UTC)
thank you!!
12th-May-2008 02:49 am (UTC)
Aww, sauce-making! I like that this was angstier than I expected, given how angsty VS is as a whole. And echoing others, the parallelism is beautiful.
12th-May-2008 02:54 am (UTC)
thank you!! i'm glad you liked it. those poor boys. i think all my fics for this challenge are gonna be pretty angsty although the other two are definitely getting happy endings. (i hope that's okay. i was kind of thinking of wacky hijinks for your lube bottle fic but it has not developped that way.)
12th-May-2008 02:55 am (UTC)
I love angst, so angst away. I'm so happy that you're writing to that prompt! Thank you!!
12th-May-2008 03:01 am (UTC)
Love. Just love. I mean, Vecchio cooking. How are you so awesome?

DragonLady
12th-May-2008 03:06 am (UTC)
aw, thank you! oh, RAY.
23rd-Aug-2008 11:44 pm (UTC)
I am fond of the inescapable truth that the entire Vecchio house would be covered in Fraser's fingerprints at that point.
24th-Aug-2008 01:34 am (UTC)
♥♥♥
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