stainwreck ([info]stainwreck) wrote in [info]destructionart,
@ 2006-08-19 16:30:00
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i've been reading these for a while and i felt it was time to make my presence known.

take me out of the rain
take me out of my bed
tell me that i'm scared
tell me that i'm losing my cool
i know i'm seeing two
turn me inside out
shake my body fast
now who's shaking fast
tell me who wanted who first
and who wants who the worst
breathe in breathe twice
breathe in breathe twice

pull my hair out from the roots
hold me i'm cold
goosebumps on my arms
tell me that i'm cold
that's what you've been told
breathe in breathe twice
breathe in breathe twice
tell me that you never wanted something new
tell me that i never wanted you

feedback or talking or anything is wonderful. i adore people.


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[info]into
2006-08-20 01:42 am UTC (link)

You live in New Jersey? Me too. :)

I really like this piece. Especially its rhythm and repetition.

'tell me that you never wanted something new
tell me that i never wanted you'


Love those lines.

Welcome to DA.

Co-Mod,
Kath.

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