Edits, please. This is maybe halfway through (or less) of what I intend on writing. I dunno about th first part (is it in character? Is it too rambly? It's it just plain stupid?) and I'm not sure about the very last part (geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh) and I'm not sure about the middle and I think maybe I need a bit of crit before I carry on. Might inspire me. I'm not entirely sure what topics of conversation Axel and Watanuki would have, beyond a bit of an insult-fest and Watapon noting there's something a bit wrong about Axel-swan (haha no heart), and I kinda have it in my head what he and Yuuko will talk about but NONETHELESS HELP PLZ.
Also please note that there's a bunch of italics and stresses in here that are missing because I'm lazy and it doesn't copy right from Word. -.-
AND I DON'T HAVE A TITLE YET.
(I do, however, like the line 'some time later' for some reason)
( TIS CRAP BUT PLEASE ADVISE ME ON MAKING IT BETTER )YAH so that's where I've become stumped. I think the last paragraph is all wrong and I have no idea how to lead on from it. HELPPPPP.