Critical Ink

Very first post!

Tue, 01 Feb 2005 08:36:10 GMT

Title: Nirvana
Author: Lola [vintagelola]
Beta: The glorious puterpatty
Pairing: Viggorli
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Orlando’s erotic dream come true.
Feedback: Loved + adored.
Warning: Not much on this ficlet, save to say that I’m new the community, and this is my first post!
Disclaimer: I don’t claim own them, so don’t sue.
Archive: x-posted a couple of places.

God, I love how you feel in my mouth. Hard and silky smooth, sliding in between my lips as if I was created for this purpose and this purpose alone. Your taste lingers on my tongue, and never have I been so certain that Nirvana truly exists. I live to swallow your sweet liquid, an elixir of life that trickles down my throat as water from a glorious fountain.

My fingers trace your length, and I quiver with pleasure. Too divine, too utterly erotic. My flesh tingles in anticipation, my lips wet from juicy kisses to your girth. I wonder idly how it would feel to have you inside of me….

Careful. So very careful, sliding you against my flesh, against the essence of me. My personal entrance, a gateway to both my heart and soul. You play upon my arousal as nothing on earth can, twisting my desires until I'm reduced to a quivering mass of nerves.

You press inside of me, a beautifully slick weight curving around each bend of my body. Euphoria as your head hits that most delectable spot, and I cry out in ecstasy….

“ORLANDO!” Viggo yells, peeking his head through the crack of my half-open bedroom door. “What the hell are you doing with that popsicle?”

OT: The Masque Awards

Thu, 29 Apr 2004 10:56:37 GMT

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the Masque Awards

Mon, 12 Apr 2004 06:51:29 GMT

Hey all....

I need a beta. I don't want to ask at the community because I don't think they would really be as harsh with me as I would like. I want someone who's willing to rip me to shreds. Soooo....

It's a LoTR RPS fiction, monaboyd, kinda fluffy and awww inducing (hopefully), very PG, and it involves.....opera. I would really appreciate someone taking a look at it, and I have no deadline whatsoever. You'd get a big thank you if I post it, and um.... muffins? A lapdance?

DIS: - Dialects!

Tue, 09 Mar 2004 06:56:59 GMT

Someone help me out? I write Monaboyd for my own fun, but I'm having difficulty, being American, to write realistic, smooth dialogue betweent he two boys. Any suggestions? I've been reading interviews other fics that have good dialogue, but, well it's difficult, because I always think "Would they actually say that?" and I don't know. So yeah. Much babbling. Thankee!

Admin: Community Rules

Sun, 07 Mar 2004 17:50:13 GMT

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