Joni ([info]lovelickhump) wrote in [info]candydicks,
@ 2008-03-26 17:28:00
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Entry tags:fandom:avenged sevenfold, genre:chaptered, pairing:brian/jimmy, pairing:matt/brian, pairing:various, rating:nc17, title:noewotboc

No One Ever Wrote of the Brothers of Christ
Title: No One Ever Wrote of the Brothers of Christ.
Chapter: Prologue.
Pairing: Brian Haner/Matt Sanders, Brian Haner/Jimmy Sullivan, various.
Rating: PG-15 - NC-17.
Word Count: 503.
Summary: In the aftershocks of the hurried stripping frenzy people are staring at him with apprehension.
Disclaimer: I don't own it because it doesn't exist. Which is deep. No, really.
Author's Note: I've had wild block for a month now, but I just picked up my laptop and this idea unfolded. It's for [info]the_staci, and if you don't know why, you obviously haven't read her work.



Brian's standing on the corner between 6th and Bond when he sees him. His coffee is cooling in his hands and even the scarf wrapped around his mouth isn't doing anything but strangling his iced flesh. His eyes water thick tears down the bridge of his nose and his very calves shiver beneath the soaked legs of his jeans. Clumps of slippery snow drop into the backs of his trainers (they weren't built for this, but neither was he) with every step. The snow is black with rush hour steps and the sky is grey even though it's morning, his breath smogging the atmosphere further, great plumes of it steaming as his lungs struggle against the confines of layers.

It's the bone crunching cold that freezes his eyeballs, and that's why he thinks it strange. Terribly strange that just a split second later he's so hot that his coffee is clattering to the floor and his hands are feverishly attempting to loosen his clothes from his burning body. Fire lights at his toes and speeds up his frame work as though he's just stepped atop a thousand air vents, his hair drying beneath his hat and his clothes fucking smoking. He panics. He grabs and pulls and he's breathless with it, licks of flame curling around his veins and heating his blood to boiling point. He thinks he's going to die, hysterically, anxiously, tearing at himself. He's going to die in a pile of ashes that flutter into the wind as hell itself rises.

His hat is on the floor with his scarf and his jacket and his t-shirt is just about to follow, yanked up and revealing a tight, pale stomach, only for the cold to return like a door's been opened, rushing in at once like a bucket of ice cubes dumped over his head; a brick wall of pure cold slamming into him; a freight train of it.

He thinks he's going insane. He pants as though he's just risen from water, stilling, his hands falling by his sides tentatively. In the aftershocks of the hurried stripping frenzy people are staring at him with apprehension. Fear. Surprise. The eyes that watch a mad man trapped behind the bars in the zoo. But it doesn't take him long to realise they're not staring at him at all.

No, not the man shivering in his t-shirt and pants with his teeth chattering and his skin flushed like sunburn breaking out in goose bumps, but the perfect circle of sidewalk around him. Where the snow has melted. About a yard in diameter and he's at the centre of it. This bone dry crop circle, still steaming from where even the water has evaporated. Proof.

His eyes are wide and the tears are freezing to his lashes all over again. He grabs at his clothing hastily, the fabric warm as fresh laundry in his hands. And as he turns, turns to escape to new burn of eyes, that's when he sees him. Just a fleck of him, black and sweeping around the corner, leaving nothing but an echo of his laughter and a memory of his own pale, trembling, furious reflection.

The man with the mirrored glasses.



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[info]pushingyouaway
2008-03-26 06:18 pm UTC (link)
....


very VERY intriguing...


moar?


*cookies*

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 07:17 pm UTC (link)
I've been watching too much Lost :[ It's a dark shame, meaning this will make zero sense.

Thank you, gorgeous! And yes,next chapter's about orgasms ;] <333

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[info]edwardsexby
2008-03-26 07:14 pm UTC (link)
Wow.

Tres bien. =)

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 07:18 pm UTC (link)
JUNO ICON.

Hell yesss.

Merci, mon cheri.

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[info]chasezed
2008-03-26 07:28 pm UTC (link)
fjkalhfa I ran around my house jumping up and down in excitement when i saw an update on here. I kid you not. Major withdrawls.

And like it was said, I am very intrigued.

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 10:35 pm UTC (link)
I kinda squeezed it out in guilt for your fic! The second chapter's there, but it's like... endless and written while I was sick, so editing it will be like dipping into a drugged up slurry of Lewis Carroll's cast off mess >>

Me too, bb, me too o.o

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[info]johnnyxcade
2008-03-26 07:47 pm UTC (link)
Wow. This is very interesting, I can't wait to read more. :)

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 10:32 pm UTC (link)
That's so lovely of you to say ^^ Thank you!

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[info]saykendrawithme
2008-03-26 07:52 pm UTC (link)
i'm intrigued. i can't wait to see what you do with this, it's a great start.

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 10:31 pm UTC (link)
Your icon is all kinds of excellent <33 Thank you, sweetheart. I hope I actually manage to do something with it D= It could have been a brief spurt of Almost Easy induced crazy!

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[info]saykendrawithme
2008-03-26 10:50 pm UTC (link)
there's no better kind of crazy! but i am gonna say i want to see what's next. :)

and thanks, it's by...oh, someone else. XD i can't take credit, anyway. :)

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-28 01:04 pm UTC (link)
Spurts always make me happy [: .....wait...

XD That's incredibly admirable. Congratulations, you're better than half the LJ population already <3

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[info]bonedaddymatty
2008-03-26 08:45 pm UTC (link)
Oooh.
I like. :D

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 10:30 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, bb =DD

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[info]the_staci
2008-03-26 10:38 pm UTC (link)
All right first and second: I hate you for the utter TEASE but I also completely get that it really had to end right there for intensity.

This is gorgeous. The detail is epic and I can picture it all, completely flawless. The emotion too, vague but intense and that's hard to do and you pulled it off perfectly. LOVE. And dear holy mother of GOD the title. I can't even tell you how STOKED I am about the title. Seriously. It makes me flail, true story!

And thank you so much for the dedication!! You're way too nice to me and I would totally protest except that I kind of like the claim on this. *keeps it*

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-26 11:06 pm UTC (link)
This was just the intro to the first chapter, but I decided to be EVIL >] Because now the chapter starts with about 500 words on how awesome orgasms are, and I felt work of such deep philosophical importance needed pride of place :|

Gosh, I love that you love it, because you're pretty much my writing idol, and I've only just crawled out of my dark little hole of Matt Mourning after the last chapter of Ehrgeiz. The whole point of this fic is a) to avoid being fanfiction (that daunting feeling where you realise you're writing fanfiction for the sake of fanfiction, rather than an actual story, urgh, it makes me feel nauseas) and b) to make Matt go rawr so I won't cry myself to sleep at night xD

THE TITLE IS THE ONLY THING I LIKE. It's probably buried subliminally as a PATD song or something, but I'm on my religious kick (spoilerspoilerspoiler) and it popped into my head and I honestly prayed for a second in thanks. Now there's pressure to do the title justice tbh ;/

Thank you so much for reading and commenting and dhdfgdfj Ily <3333

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[info]the_staci
2008-03-26 11:24 pm UTC (link)
Oh man, when I read through it I had to stop for a second and think and was like: "...did he just come so hard he actually went straight to hell?!" Or like, escape of a demon from hell through the release of an epic full-body orgasm.

Ah, well, I can't say Ehrgeiz is gonna get much happier any time soon so hey, if the Matt Mourning is working as inspiration we're good! *high fives!* As much as I love to hurt him I really love the fics that make him do the rawring too. :D I seriously can't wait for more of this. ♥ ♥ ♥

Edited at 2008-03-26 11:25 pm UTC

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-28 01:08 pm UTC (link)
GOD DAMNIT, you've uncovered my entire evil plot! Demons escape from hell via the epic energy fields of delicious prostatey orgasms, k? Hmph. Now I gotta think of something else. Luckily there's an endless amount of things you can do with orgasms. I'm thinking of collecting them. Like.. .. not me... but... o_o

Byebye bubble of hope for his salvation :[ I don't suppose Brian's going to get on his rescuer hat, huh? Complete with baseball bat and/or gun? ...Fishing for spoilers? Moi? Never! >> Awh lovely, thank you ♥ ♥ I can't wait for more of yours either, but you should know that by now [:

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[info]the_staci
2008-03-28 02:43 pm UTC (link)
Srsly I can't wait for this next chapter and it's philosophical five hundred words on the human condition utter nnngh or orgasms. :D

And I am bored at work and totally willing to give you spoilers if you really want them. staci.sisk@gmail.com is my email if you want answers, lady! You're still too kind, and I thank you for it. ILY<3

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[info]one_winged_hao
2008-03-26 11:36 pm UTC (link)
You're lucky you have people like [info]the_staci flying that Bratt flag because otherwise, you'd be at the bottom of the sea.

This was interesting.

But me being me, I have to ask:

Pairing: Brian Haner/Matt Sanders, Brian Haner/Jimmy Sullivan, various.

Jimmy and Brian? Wtf?

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-27 12:04 am UTC (link)
Tell me about it. But I dare you to find a better savior.

Don't look at me like that, woman. You'll be feeling it! It'll be in a brodown sort of unrequited awkward way, but for the joy of baby Jesus you'll feel it.

Thanks for reading, love. I'm glad you found it interesting.

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[info]one_winged_hao
2008-03-27 12:08 am UTC (link)
I still want to know what happened to that other one where Matt was servicing serving Brian in a shop.

I'm going to cut you up and put you in a little bag if you don't deliver with this.

There, I said it.

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-03-27 02:16 am UTC (link)
Right now chapter two is reaching epic lengths on my dead laptop. It has a whole intro about High School Musical. Don't say you've never wondered how the boys would respond to that shiz. I was going for period drama (did you notice Holes? The X Files? I was gonna relive my childhood) but it was way too tempting.

I find that kinky.

Even though 'there, I said it' makes everything innocent.

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[info]xandressamalfoy
2008-03-26 11:55 pm UTC (link)
Mmm... wow, you never fail to impress me, Kay. I really like the ambiguity of this, the poetic feel of how you described the cold to heat. It was really enchanting.

Glad to see you're writing again! ♥ Can't wait for more of this.

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-04-18 07:35 pm UTC (link)
JDKJFG JAAADE <3

Gosh, your comments are as eloquently glorious as your fic. That's just not fair, woman.

Thank you so much, gorgeous <333

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[info]xandressamalfoy
2008-04-18 08:40 pm UTC (link)
Heheh, I try, love. You're welcome!

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[info]bbarclayspn
2008-03-27 10:32 am UTC (link)
This is possibly the most intense and intriguing intros I've ever read. Ever. The detail you've managed to convey is amazing. To be honest, the whole thing was flawless =) I'm totally stoked for the rest!

First I saw you'd posted, and I went to click - then I saw the title and dear God I couldn't click fast enough! My clicking finger was a blur, seriously. <3

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-04-18 07:35 pm UTC (link)
Your reviews are so amazing :[ Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like the title. It's essentially the biggest spoiler... ever, but I'm glad it works. <3333

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[info]money_and_run
2008-03-29 11:20 pm UTC (link)
Nice. Totally into it.

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[info]lovelickhump
2008-04-18 07:35 pm UTC (link)
From you that means the world!

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