calmacil_20 ([info]calmacil_20) wrote in [info]blueflame_hhr,
@ 2006-05-03 14:23:00
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Current mood: creative
Current music:Touch the Sky - Kanye West
Entry tags:harry/hermione, the notes of love

The Notes of Love - We're at the Top of the World
Finally I've gotten around to posting my maiden story on here! Thanks again to everyone who has joined, and I know [info]herminia and myself will do our best to keep you reading! So, without further ado...

Title: The Notes of Love - We're at the Top of the World
Auhtor: [info]calmacil_20
Rating:
PG
Ship: Harry/Hermione
Summary: An escape after destroying a Horcrux
Author's Note: The first piece in a collection that I'll be periodically adding to called "The Notes of Love," that will just be little ficlets based on song lyrics (usually no more than a couple of lines) that really speak to me. Nothing really spectacular, but hope everyone enjoys it anyway. 


I’m up here running behind you,

I’m up here running in repeat.

- We’re at the Top of the World

The Juliana Theory

 

The mansion was screaming as it crashed down around them, sounding like a chorus of tortured shrieks and wails. The walls shook and rattled as the ground heaved angrily.

 

Hermione watched as Harry barely dodged a piece of plaster that came falling down from the crumbling ceilings. Bricks were falling like rain, and she just managed to get out of the way as one nearly cracked her on the head. She could hear Ron’s urgent pleas to run faster coming from behind her, but she only had time to take a quick look back at him through the whirlwind of dust and debris. Holes were starting to open up in the ground like gaping mouths, and she had to concentrate to make sure she didn’t accidentally fall into one.

 

Nice back-up plan, she thought bitterly to herself as she hurtled down the hall. Voldemort must have rigged the mansion so that if anyone took what was in its top floor, the whole house would just fall apart, burying anyone inside in the process.

 

Still, she couldn’t help but smile as she thought joke’s on you – we already took the Horcrurx. This was the third one they’d found, which meant that Voldemort was running out of time. His defenses were getting more and more complicated and cunning, as the evil wizard grew more and more desperate. With only one more Horcrurx left, she tried not to imagine what would be next.

 

A huge wooden beam crashing down in front of her brought her back to reality. No time to worry about the next one she scolded herself. We need to get out of here first. She risked a second look back to make sure Ron was still there, and then looked ahead and focused on her goal. Harry.

 

He was ahead of her and increasing the distance between them, and she ran fiercely to stay close. Even though he didn’t have a broom, he appeared to be falling back on his quidditch skills, ducking and weaving through the mayhem as they made their way to the exit. She knew that he never thought of himself as having grace, but as she watched him now, there was no denying that he did.

 

She could see a small rectangle of light further on, and knew they were getting closer to the exit. The building seemed to sense this, and bigger and bigger pieces started slamming down around them.

 

She allowed herself a brief moment to wonder how many times she had put herself in danger for Harry. She knew that it was too many times to count, just like she knew that she’d do it all again in a moment. For him, she’d do just about anything.

 

The door was getting bigger! They were almost out!

 

Just before they reached the end, Harry glanced back at her, looking directly into her eyes, a look of concern and relief playing across his own green eyes. She knew that he wanted to keep her safe, for reasons that he probably didn’t fully realize, and would probably again try to talk her out of going with them after the final Horcrurx.

 

She just smiled at him and thought I’m right here running behind you, Harry Potter, and that’s how it’s going to stay. 

 

He smiled in return and plunged through the door into the light of day, with his best friend and the one who loved him more than he knew right behind.



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[info]spellbound
2006-05-03 09:28 pm UTC (link)
aww! I loved it! :]

The song lyrics fit perfectly. Well done. :]

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[info]calmacil_20
2006-05-04 03:46 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes the lyrics inspire the image, sometimes it's the other way 'round, this time it just sort of fit. Thanks for the comment!

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[info]jeanniefillion
2006-05-03 09:49 pm UTC (link)
That was just perfect! Brilliant! ♥

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[info]calmacil_20
2006-05-04 03:47 am UTC (link)
Haha, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping this'll be the first of many!

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[info]jeanniefillion
2006-05-04 02:19 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome! Oooh, I hope so too. :)

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[info]starofrock21
2006-05-03 09:50 pm UTC (link)
AWSOME but ... there must be more that was cute but i need more plzz ur really good im sure ever1s gonna want a follow up chptr so if u could not to be rude actually... its kind of a compliment lol

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[info]calmacil_20
2006-05-04 03:49 am UTC (link)
Haha, thanks for the compliment. Like I said, this is the first in a collection of pieces based on song lyrics I'll be posting. I haven't decided if they'll all form a cohesive web, or just be random times in their relationship, but this isn't the last. No worries!

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[info]herminia
2006-05-03 10:19 pm UTC (link)
You already know this, but I really love this song ficlet! Hermione is nothing short of perfect. She's Rowling's Hermione, and Harry is Rowling's oblivious!thick-headed!needs-to-come-to-his-senses-about-his-feelings-for-his-best-friend!Harry ;-)

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[info]calmacil_20
2006-05-04 03:50 am UTC (link)
Haha, thanks friend! If I get the characters right, I'm happy. Thanks for giving it a proofread too! =)

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[info]alory_shannon
2006-05-04 03:16 am UTC (link)
I adore it.

Can't wait for the next time you're inspired to write another. ^_^

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[info]calmacil_20
2006-05-04 03:51 am UTC (link)
Haha, thank you so much. "Adore" is quite the compliment. I've already got the next two lyrics that I want to use written down, I just need to find the time to write them. Keep an eye out!

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