Ai ([info]aiwritingfic) wrote in [info]apples_for_me,
@ 2008-04-20 20:28:00
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Entry tags:au: dragons of the rising sun, fandom: prince of tennis, fandom: temeraire, pot: fuji shuusuke, pot: inui sadaharu, pot: yanagi renji, pot: yukimura seiichi, special: crossover au

[One-shot] Discovery (Prince of Tennis / Temeraire)
Title: Discovery
Fandoms: Prince of Tennis / Naomi Novik's Temeraire
Characters: Yanagi, Inui, Yukimura, Fuji
Words/Rating: 1400+ words / G
Summary: With the (unknowing) help of Yukimura and Fuji, Yanagi teaches his dragon Inui about data one can measure--and data one can't.
Author's Notes: As a prize for pinning me down during [info]subrosa_tennis, [info]haruyuki asked for a fic with the prompt, "Renji tries to teach his dragon to collect data." Part of the Dragons of the Rising Sun AU, this scene comes before Sanada changes riders. I originally thought this would turn out to be short and plotless, but something else crept in. I hope you like it anyway. ^_^



"Yukimura is returning," Yanagi said. "What's different from this morning?"

Inui lifted his head, yellow eyes staring at the figures in the distance. "Ten minutes and ... twelve seconds later than scheduled," he answered, looking down at Yanagi's watch. "They're a little off-course. They left five-and-three-quarter degrees to the east, this morning."

That was better than the answer Inui had given yesterday, when Inui had not noted the time. "Very good," Yanagi said, stroking Inui's ebony scales. "Anything else?"

Inui squinted; Yanagi made a mental note to say something to the dragon-vet later. "They're flying higher than usual. About ... two Fuji-lengths. Two-and-a-seventh, to be exact."

His dragon was definitely beginning to understand how data was collected. Inui was so precise with his measurements, too. "Good work, Inui," Yanagi said, and he gave Inui a light pat. "Now, can you make any further observations?"

"They have flown very far today, because the coast is two hours, eighteen minutes, and ten seconds away at Fuji's cruising speed, and the five-and-three-quarter degrees extrapolate to ..." Inui paused, calculating. "Two hundred and seven kilometers, and ... thirty-two centimeters." He shook his head. "We've done better."

Yanagi chuckled at the remark; they both knew it was bias and not much more. Patrols weren't races. "Any more?" he prompted.

Inui looked at Yanagi, at the two approaching figures, and then at Yanagi again. "They're in high spirits," he finally said, a little slower this time. "I admit I cannot guess why."

Almost, but not quite. Perhaps a hint, then. "You know how much Yukimura and Fuji love to fly, and how curious Fuji can be," Yanagi said. "You also know Yukimura indulges Fuji whenever possible, too. Does that help?"

"No," Inui said. There was a hint of petulance in his voice now. "Renji, just tell me."

"We flew that stretch of coastline last week," Yanagi said. "Cliffs. Overlooks. Standing reefs. Tunnels. And if I remember correctly--"

"Caves," Inui said, jerkling a little. His head snapped up, and he glared at the still-approaching duo. "Fuji is small enough to fit in that cave! No wonder he's flying so high up--the exit must be above the entrance." Inui unfolded his wings and rose, tense. "That is our cave, Renji, and I'm going to--"

"Inui," Yanagi said, loudly so he would be sure to get Inui's attention. "Try and remember. Why didn't we go into the cave?"

"There was no way I would fit without significantly damaging the structural properties of the surrounding rock," Inui said reluctantly. "I told you, Renji, I would make sure you got onto the ledge and off it safely. Your caution is commendable, but the ledge extended two-and-a-fifth meters, and you would have had a meter of clearance either way. Now Yukimura has gone into your cave before you!" Inui looked upset.

Yanagi reached up and stroked his dragon's face. "Fuji can cover more of the cave than I could have done on foot."

"I will learn to coast like Fuji," Inui said. "If I fold my wings, the chances that I may be able to squeeze into--"

Foolishness, but Yanagi guessed Inui did not truly mean words spoken in the heat of the moment. Dragons, however calculating and rational, were still possessive creatures, and Yanagi did not expect Inui to be very different in that respect. "And stay there until we blast the cliff to pieces? Be rational, Inui. Let the smaller dragons be the scouts," Yanagi said, interrupting Inui before he got any further. "Would you mount cannons on Fuji?"

"That would be illogical," Inui said, shaking his head. "Fuji is too small. He can't carry more than three people without needing an under-harness for the third. If we tied a cannon to him, he would barely be able to take off."

"Whereas you do not seem to notice the weight of the ammunition we carry," Yanagi said.

"I'm one of the biggest dragons in the fleet," Inui said. He straightened his spine. "Sanada may be the oldest and the most experienced, but I am half-again his weight."

"Indeed," Yanagi said, stroking Inui's foreleg. "So don't take Fuji's incursion so personally, Inui."

Although Inui made a rumble of dissent, he re-folded his wings and settled back down, carefully making sure he didn't crush Yanagi. "Always the reasonable one," he said, giving Yanagi a look Yanagi preferred to interpret as fond.

"Your data collection has improved tremendously," Yanagi said just as Fuji and Yukiimura landed lightly beside them, barely disturbing much dust from the ground. Something glinted from inside Fuji's mesh harness. The mesh was in the way, and Yanagi couldn't be absolutely sure, but that looked like--

"Yukimura," Yanagi said. "You've found something." He could hear his heart give a thump. A discovery. Yukimura would not ask Fuji to carry anything frivolous, so this must be significant. But what was Yukimura doing with a green stone?

Yukimura smiled at Yanagi and patted Fuji's back. "Why don't you show Yanagi and Inui what we got for them, Fuji?" he said, sounding pleased. "They'd like the souvenir."

"Souvenir?" Inui said, scales bristling a little. Yanagi put his hand on Inui's leg to steady him; he wanted to know, because if he was right, then ...

Fuji undid his mesh harness and pulled out an emerald the size of Yukimura's head.

Both Inui and Yanagi stared at it. Yanagi had never seen an emerald that size, though he knew it was possible. Still, to think there was a completely unpredicted deposit of emerald so close ... "For ... us?" Inui said, eyeing the emerald with a glint in his eyes.

"It's only fair," Fuji said. Yanagi marvelled at how Fuji always managed to make a dragon's rumble sound light and graceful. "Yukimura said the first ones to find the cave should have something to remember it by."

Yanagi looked at Yukimura, who laughed. "The entrance was a tight fit, even for Fuji. You were right about that, at least. You didn't predict the emeralds, though, did you?"

Yanagi was loathe to admit that, but Yukimura could spot Yanagi's white lies however he tried to conceal them. "No."

"You told him," Inui said suddenly. Yanagi looked up to see Inui in a rare frown.

So Inui had finally put it together. "Yes, I did," Yanagi sai. "As I said, Fuji can cover more of the cave than I can on foot."

From deep inside Inui came a low growl that made Yanagi's stomach quiver. "You didn't tell me you told him," Inui said, and Yanagi could feel Inui's muscles tense. "Renji."

Two heartbeats passed.

Yukimura clapped his hands lightly. "We should report in before they send out a search party," he said, smiling at both Yanagi and Inui before mounting Fuji. "I trust I will see you in the hall later, Renji." Yanagi noted that Yukimura's last words were said while looking at Inui, but Inui's gaze remained fixed on Yanagi.

Yanagi barely acknowledged Yukimura and Fuji's departure; Inui seemed too distracted to bid them farewell properly, either. As soon as Fuji was airborne, Inui asked, "Am I not your dragon, Renji?"

"Of course you are," Yanagi said. "Am I not your rider?"

"You are," Inui said. "Then ..." He trailed off and was silent, frowning again. "Renji," he finally said, "Why didn't you tell me you'd asked Yukimura and Fuji to scout the cave?"

"You should have predicted that, Inui. Did I hide it from you?" Yanagi asked.

He waited as Inui considered the question. Finally, Inui shook his head. "No," he answered. "The signs were there. Fuji would not have brought his mesh bag if Yukimura had not suggested it, and Yukimura usually rides Fuji with the least amount of equipment possible. There was a nine-out-of-ten chance it had been under orders, though. How should I have known the reason to be you?"

Yanagi rubbed the crease that had appeared between Inui's eyes. "Occasionally, Inui, one must make educated guesses." It was, in truth, an unfair expectation; Inui could not have seen Yanagi pull Yukimura to one side privately in the confines of the Great Hall. Injustice, however, would ensure Inui remembered this. "You should not wait for me to ask you."

"Oh," Inui said. He moved his head out of Yanagi's reach before resting it on his foreleg, and was quiet. Sensing Inui was thinking, Yanagi stroked Inui's scales and waited.

"Renji," Inui finally said, head turning to look in the direction Yukimura and Fuji had gone. He didn't look at Yanagi. "Will you ever tell me anything voluntarily again?"

"You must learn not to rely on me and my calculations, Inui," Yanagi said firmly. Inui was not bred for intelligence like Fuji, but Yanagi knew his kind to be capable of incredibly quick calculation. Properly trained, Inui would always be a great dragon, even when Yanagi was long gone. "My human brain is not capable of the feats yours is. Do not waste it, Inui."

"I see," Inui said. He didn't say any more, and remained silent into the evening, only acknowledging Yanagi's departure for dinner in the Great Hall with a nod.

 




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[info]crysaliz
2008-04-20 12:26 pm UTC (link)
<3333333 Dragon!Inui!!!!!!!!!!

and sdfghjk at the data capturing...and Inui's jealousy XD

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-20 12:28 pm UTC (link)
*snuggles and loves* <3 I'm so glad you liked him. Inui as a dragon is difficult. T_T And of course Inui was jealous! ♥ You caught me in mid-edit. ^_^;;;;;; I hope you enjoy the revised version, fleshed-out with more detail!

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[info]crysaliz
2008-04-20 12:35 pm UTC (link)
But i like the way u've captured him though..although him not whipping out a book and writing in it makes me miss him a bit XD oops! hahahha, but I went and re-read it and the revised version does flesh out some bits. Possessive Dragons FTW!

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[info]macey_muse
2008-04-20 12:34 pm UTC (link)
First: eeeeeeeeee dragons! ok, now that that sentiment's been expressed *coughs*

I -adore- their dynamic - Inui! So young! (hmm. but, is he full-grown here (the sizes)? dernit, I need to read Temeraire so. badly. maybe I got the 'young' vibe because he's learning.) And so disgruntled - why is can't Yanagi just -tell- him? *pets him* Two-and-a-seventh dragon lengths! <3

Yukimura and Fuji are just - jfkdla; so -themselves-. Idk. Kind of just a little taunting, but Yukimura doesn't really -mean- to be, that's just how he is.

*flails at you* YAY DRAGONS

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-20 12:37 pm UTC (link)
♥ You squee-ball. *snuggles* Inui is young-ish! Older than Fuji, but definitely born within Yanagi's lifetime. I didn't want to specify an age ... You will be able to read Temeraire soon, and the other books as well. *snuggles you* In the meantime, you can read this AU! Don't let me give you too many wrong ideas, though. ^_^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

Ah, so the dragons are the only reason why people read (or don't, as the case may be) this AU! *laughs and snuggles you* Well, I can't say the dragons weren't the reason I wrote it. ♥

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[info]macey_muse
2008-04-20 12:41 pm UTC (link)
*snuggles back* i haz dilemma: I have a choir bus-trip in, oh, three hours' time, and no book. Not to mention another to -edinburgh- next weekend. No book. Temeraire on shelf. Tour so far, far away...

(I won't deny that 'dragons!' are a very happy occurence. eee dragons. but I'd still read this if they were, idk, psychic beluga whales? XD you're putting (the souls of) all my favourite tennis-boys into a situation which is completely alien, but keeping them so true whilst still showing that the situation isn't alien for -them-. if that makes sense. ^.^')

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[info]thephoenixboy
2008-04-20 01:16 pm UTC (link)
(Can I say "eeeeee dragons" as well?)

Loving how the Rikkai team carries over slightly into this. Also, Fuji=still small and sneaky. Shy Inui is v cute (which surprised me as I don't normally go for him XD).

Got to run, should be in badminton! (Hence terrible structure of this review *_*)

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-20 01:20 pm UTC (link)
(You can. ♥) I took Sanada from Yukimura; I had to make sure Yukimura still had someone. *grins* Thank you for taking time to comment--there is no such thing as a terribly structured review in my book. Have fun in badminton! ♥

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[info]haruyuki
2008-04-20 01:29 pm UTC (link)
Ahh --- you posted it! ♥♥♥

And, um, where to start with this? I loved how Inui is so recognizably....Inui, even if he's a dragon. Loved his bouts of jealously - as well as the image of Renji trying to sooth them by petting him xD - and that specific streak of stubbornness he has. (And, I'm guessing in terms of age he's....older than Fuji, but younger than Sanada?)

And the ending....I agree, something else crept in, but, whatever it was, it really fitted with them. Though it did make things serious all of a sudden, and made me want to give Inui a pat on the head as well. :P

"Always the reasonable one," he said, giving Yanagi a look Yanagi preferred to interpret as fond.

This line made me smile. It really seemed to sum up their particular brand of friendship.

And I could go on and on and on....Just, thank you for this!! ♥

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-20 01:40 pm UTC (link)
I'm SO GLAD Inui is still recognizable as a dragon. *clings to you and hearts* With Fuji I wasn't worried, but with Sanada and Inui you just KNOW that the dynamic will change because they're dragons and there are some fundamental things about dragons that won't change. Dragons are so pettable, scales and all, I say. *grins* (Yes, you're right--Inui was born in Yanagi's lifetime, though definitely before Fuji. Good guess!)

I'm so glad you didn't mind the ending. ♥ It did, and I was worried, but then I thought about it, and it was just ... them, and I couldn't take it out now that I knew that was how things were going to be. Fits, though, considering what Fuji's hatching will reveal (if/when I finally write that freaking albatross).

Hee. I didn't expect this request, but it was an excuse to write something non-PW, and I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It made the red ink, the sleepless nights, the four days of scribbling and thinking, and the "omg is this IC?" all worth it. ♥♥♥

Edited at 2008-04-20 01:50 pm UTC

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[info]haruyuki
2008-04-21 04:19 am UTC (link)
In my opinion, Inui is still fairly pettable, even if he isn't a dragon. xD

(....were they maybe born a day apart, just like in the manga?)

You really shouldn't tease us with these snippets of information, because you KNOW that we're just going to jump at them and tell you yes, you should write more. ^_^*

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(no subject) - [info]aiwritingfic, 2008-04-21 04:23 am UTC

[info]alice_and_lain
2008-04-20 06:59 pm UTC (link)
I love Inui as a dragon. Oh my. The jealousy was sweet. Our cave. *laughs*

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-20 10:32 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, I think this may be the first time you've read a story of mine. ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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[info]_sabriel
2008-04-20 11:00 pm UTC (link)
I loved this. I like the fact that Renji's teaching Inui how to collect data...it sort of mirrors canon facts at the same time.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-20 11:02 pm UTC (link)
*hearts* I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ♥ *snuggle*

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[info]shleaf_fl
2008-04-21 01:31 am UTC (link)
Wee! More Dragons AU!!! ^_^ I know you've mentioned the Inui-Yanagi dragon-rider pair previously, but to see Yanagi train dragon!Inui to analyse data still breaks my brain (a little). Lol. And I keep imagining dragon!Inui wearing thick, black-framed glasses. ROFL.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-21 04:18 am UTC (link)
*hearts and snuggles you* I'm glad you liked! I still haven't written Fuji's hatching, but it will come eventually. (Yeah, that was why I made Inui black--I couldn't stop thinking about those glasses! XD)

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[info]mmorpgsforlife
2008-04-21 06:12 am UTC (link)
Aww, Inui's jealous =)

As the others have said, the data observation was fun. And very Inui/Yanagi.

I don't know if I like Inui as a big dragon though... Something about him being the heavy artillery doesn't seem right =/

But it was still very good =)

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-21 06:21 am UTC (link)
He is. ^_^ I'm glad the data was fun!

Unfortunately it was either Inui as a small dragon, or Inui as a big one. And considering Inui is the tallest of the Seigaku regulars (184cm, and 62kg), I thought it would be fitting. Sanada is "only" 180cm (though he outweighs Inui by 6kg--I took some liberties with that, though. ^_^;). In my mind, Inui is definitely the "heavy artillery" type, moreso than Momo. If only because you know Inui would be able to bomb in a VERY deadly manner (adjusting for windshear, velocity, etc etc etc perfectly to hit dead center every time, or cause the most amount of damage).

But yes ... there was a reason why it took [info]haruyuki's prompt for me to actually write this. ^_^; I'm very glad you liked it anyway! ♥

Edited at 2008-04-21 06:21 am UTC

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[info]lady_of_water
2008-04-21 11:26 am UTC (link)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! EEEEEEEEEE!

You KNOW how much I adore this crossover! And DATA PAIR OMG! It's early in the morning and I'm barely coherent and when I saw this, I nearly screamed.
*FLAIL*
Renji totally taught Inui everything he knows, and I love Inui!dragon and I love the fucking huge emerald and I LOVE YOU.

Write more, dear god.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-21 02:56 pm UTC (link)
*laughs and loves you* ♥ Oh Arii. I love comments that begin with squee. ♥ I didn't know you were a big Data Pair fan or I'd have told you about it sooner! *not sure whether to alert [info]kishmet to this one* And hee. ^_^ People request, I write, I guess. Having requests from an existing AU allows me to write more easily than just random prompts. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ♥

Edited at 2008-04-21 02:56 pm UTC

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[info]pchan02
2008-04-30 12:46 am UTC (link)
how cute!

i love how pissy dragon inui gets. heh.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-04-30 02:35 am UTC (link)
*laughs* Pissy is one way to describe it. ^_^ Thank you--I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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(no subject) - [info]pchan02, 2008-04-30 03:10 am UTC

[info]dhorz
2008-05-21 08:20 am UTC (link)
LOL... dragon!Inui is adorable. XDDD
I love how he got jealous. *squishes*

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[info]aiwritingfic
2008-05-21 03:30 pm UTC (link)
Hee, he's possessive of Renji. ♥ (Thank you for the comment! ♥)

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