Ai ([info]aiwritingfic) wrote in [info]apples_for_me,
@ 2007-05-06 21:13:00
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Entry tags:fandom: hikaru no go, hng: ogata seiji

[One-shot] Eleven Hands (Hikaru no Go)
Title: Eleven Hands
Fandoms: Hikaru no Go
Characters: Ogata
Wordcount/Rating/Warnings: 700+ words / PG / mentions of OCs
Summary: She didn't ask him to teach her, and he didn't offer.
Spoilers/Author's Notes: I figured it was time to give the PoT muses a break and kill some HnG OCs instead. ^_^ I just wanted to explain why Ogata wears that hideous white suit using as cliche an explanation as I could get. Dedicated to all the [info]blind_go commenters/reviewers and authors; short!fic to snack on during breaks between all the 5k behemoths. Happy reading, and Happy Hikago Day one day late!





1.

She didn't ask him to teach her, and he didn't offer.

2.

As he slid into the seat across from her, he looked at the Go Weekly peeking out from her handbag, and then gave her a bemused look. "I already have a subscription," he said. "If you wanted to read it, I could have given you some old copies."

"I don't need to rely on you for news," she'd replied, and then pulled out a magnetic board. "Play me."

3.

She wouldn't ever be pro-level, but there was a shape to her stones that Ogata found somehow immensely pleasing. Now she only needed a single-digit handicap when facing him. Only you, she'd said, laughing.

4.

"Damn that old man," Ogata said, gritting his teeth. White suits the height of fashion indeed. Everyone else was watching him, he was sure of it. He would take the Honinbou title that year to make up for this humiliation, he swore.

"I don't mind," he heard, and then she was smiling softly as she slipped a hand into his. "When you wear something different, I can always find you easily, no matter how big the crowd around you."

5.

The day he moved in his favorite goban was the day she beat him with a seven-stone handicap. That was also the day before the Sunday morning Ogata woke up with a go stone embedded in his side and her curled up in his arms. They celebrated her victory again as the stones lay on the goban five steps away from their futon.

Six hours later she pushed him into yose with six stones, and he knew this was the one.

6.

There had been no warning. There never was.

Ogata stopped visiting her at the hospital. It distracted him from his games.

In the end, the Honinbou title slipped from his grasp another year. The old man looked at him closely and didn't play as many tricks as he usually did.

Ogata didn't need pity.

7.

He finally retrieved his things from her apartment.

He didn't attend her funeral, but sent flowers, unsigned.

8.

Number two was pretty and had a sense of fashion, yet didn't comment on Ogata's decidedly unique style. She clung to Ogata, hanging off his arm, and didn't pay attention when he spoke of go. "Of course everyone should know how to play! But I'll never be as good as you," she said, smiling at him.

He didn't stay that night, only nodded and bid her goodbye at her front door.

9.

"Good luck," the fifth one said to him that morning. As if she were her.

"You don't even know what title I'm playing for," Ogata said, coldly, driving away before she could apologize or defend herself or say something that she would never say.

He didn't answer her calls for three days, but he eventually went back when his bed grew too lonely. In the dark, when she moaned and bucked under his touch, he could almost pretend it was her again.

10.

Ogata, his white suit neatly pressed, yellow handkerchief pushing up from his breast pocket, scanned the crowd from the side of the room. As was to be expected, she wasn't there.

The Hand of God, Ogata thought, scoffing inwardly as he lit a cigarette and puffed, staring unfocused into the distance over the heads of the party-goers. If there was truly a Hand of God, it was a cruel hand and delighted in the torment of others. Ogata knew that when he found it, he would crush it.

11.

He watched Shindou, playing now after three months away. Shindou, who occasionally looked to the side and then stopped, looking disappointed. Shindou, who had acquired a fan like Zama ex-Ouza's, where there had never been a need for one before. Shindou, who looked occasionally lost and alone when the young pro thought no one was looking.

Ogata thought he understood why Shindou had not been able to play. He watched as Shindou eyed Touya Akira across the board.

The resiliance of youth. Ogata smirked to himself. Perhaps he was getting old. He was beginning to sound like Kuwabara.




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[info]aishuu
2007-05-06 02:07 pm UTC (link)
Really nice. I like this Ogata portrayal.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-07 04:19 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]verloren1983
2007-05-06 03:38 pm UTC (link)
Eeee, you posted it! I thought you were going to mess around with this? I'm glad you didn't, though. ^_^

11 is still my favorite. <3

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-06 10:08 pm UTC (link)
^_^ I decided to post this one and write the other one from scratch. ^_^

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[info]epigrammist
2007-05-06 09:45 pm UTC (link)
♥ ♥ ♥

...you already know how much I love your writing (and Ogata). ^_^

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-06 10:09 pm UTC (link)
*snuggles and loves* <3

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[info]qem_chibati
2007-05-06 10:22 pm UTC (link)
This alternatively made me smile (white suit! ♥ ) and broke my heart. Oh Ogata!

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-07 04:18 am UTC (link)
*snuggles* <3 Thanks. Poor man, I like to angst with him.

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[info]sarasusa
2007-05-07 12:56 am UTC (link)
Waaah. Beautiful. Ogata!

That is all. :-)

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-07 04:19 am UTC (link)
<3 *snuggles* Thank you.

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[info]sivullinen
2007-05-07 10:08 am UTC (link)
It's very nice to once in a while see Ogata who is not shagging Ashiwara :D

Gotta love #11. ♥

And #7. *tear*

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-07 12:49 pm UTC (link)
HE really isn't a ho, contrary to what the people who voted me fandom bicycle think ... ^_^;;;

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[info]viridian_magpie
2007-05-07 07:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh yes. 11. *loves* But I also really like no. 10.

Anyway, pretty and sad and lovely.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-07 11:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much! <3

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[info]flonnebonne
2007-05-08 10:26 am UTC (link)
You made me feel sympathy for Ogata! No mean feat, considering that I usually feel pity or apathy toward him (in serious fic, I mean). A very interesting read.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-08 02:30 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. <3 The man is much maligned in fic, really. Pedophile, sex predator etc etc ... he's just a go-obsessed man.

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[info]tininess
2007-05-17 08:46 am UTC (link)
Just found this. Wow. ♥ Heartbreaking and ... this is a new Ogata for me... I like how you write him. ^_^" ♥

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-17 09:26 am UTC (link)
*snuggles* <3 Thank you! Er, yes, I was dubbed fandom "Aigata" recently ... ^_^;;;;;

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[info]chaineddove
2007-05-22 02:39 pm UTC (link)
Lovely <3

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-05-22 03:26 pm UTC (link)
<3 <3 <3 You are catching up on your reading I see.

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[info]everysecondtues
2007-08-16 06:24 pm UTC (link)
Aww, Ogata. I like the format of this.

Yay, finally have the time to read some of your fic. <3

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-08-17 12:11 am UTC (link)
<3 <3 <3 Thank you! (*cheers as you are now reading!*)

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[info]ontogenesis
2007-09-10 12:55 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I enjoyed these a lot. The woman seems like exactly the sort of person who would be a good match for Ogata: strong, quietly confident, with a sense of humor. And the way Ogata deals with his loss is quite in character - denial and distancing himself. It's interesting how Ogata is able to realize what happened to Shindou through his own loss.

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[info]aiwritingfic
2007-09-10 01:17 pm UTC (link)
<3 <3 <3 You're still reading them! <3 <3 <3 THANK YOU. <3

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Review.
(Anonymous)
2008-07-06 08:02 am UTC (link)
I like your take on Ogata. Seems he understand Hikaru the most.
-scylliana-

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Re: Review.
[info]aiwritingfic
2008-07-06 01:17 pm UTC (link)
♥ Ogata seems to be one of those people who sees everything and just keeps it (possibly for blackmail, possibly just so he can understand people better on the goban).

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