子猫つぼみ ([info]tsubomi) wrote in [info]animelyricsanon,
@ 2008-01-13 03:49:00
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[LYRICS DISCUSSION] Riyu Kosaka - KOKORO no Ato
Hello again, sorry to bother you all again so soon...

This is probably going to be a little messy, so any help is appreciated.


This song seems so long to me, though I guess it's really not...

Anyway... uh... there's a lot of spacing I'm unsure about, but the only thing I'm really going to ask about is '出たんだ'. Is it 'detanda' or some other spacing?

x.x Well... in any case, any help with spacing, typos, etc, is greatly appreciated. Thank you for your time, as always! :3 I'll make sure to leave you all alone for a little bit now...

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記憶の空に響いてく言葉
時間の中さ迷いながらそっとそっと唱う

kioku no sora ni hibiiteku kotoba
jikan no naka samayoinagara sotto sotto utau

誰を護るの?何を求めるの?
見えないもの?大切なもの?
「かけがえのない人」

dare wo mamoru no? nani wo motomeru no?
mienai mono? taisetsu na mono?
"kakegae no nai hito"

舞い散る花びらのように
めぐりめぐりめぐり逢う明日も
私が託した長い長い夢の旅…

maichiru hanabira no you ni
meguri meguri meguriau ashita mo
watashi ga takushita nagai nagai yume no tabi...

今宵も願うの
強くなれココロ
いつかはふたりで歩けますように…
寄せては返した気まぐれな未来…
この路この場所
そして私はここにいうよ
足跡残して…
「また逢いにくるよ、その時まで」

koyoi mo negau no
tsuyoku nare KOKORO
itsuka wa futari de arukemasu you ni...
yosete wa kaeshita kimagure na mirai...
kono michi kono basho
soshite watashi wa koko ni iru yo
ashiato nokoshite...
"mata ai ni kuru yo, sono toki made"

いつかの星と季節は流れて
いつの間にか色褪せて
また違う風が吹く

itsuka no hoshi to kisetsu wa nagarete
itsu no ma ni ka iroasete
mata chigau kaze ga fuku

振り返りながら歩いた
たどりたどりたどり着くあの日に
あなたと私と長い長い夢の旅

furikaerinagara aruita
tadori tadori tadoritsuku ano hi ni
anata to watashi to nagai nagai yume no tabi

今宵も願うの
離れてく鼓動
迷いも痛みも涙も癒して
寄せては返した気まぐれな未来
この声この手が届かなくてもここにいるよ
思い出残して
また逢える日まで
その時まで…

koyoi mo negau no
hanareteku kodou
mayoi mo itami mo namida mo iyashite
yosete wa kaeshita kimagure na mirai
kono koe kono te ga todokanakute mo koko ni iru yo
omoide nokoshite
mata aeru hi made
sono toki made...

昨日だって今日だってキヲクを辿って輝きを探す旅に出たんだ
ひとつ‥ふたつ‥拾い集めた
大事に大事に抱きしめてたから

kinou datta kyou datta KIWOKU wo tadotte kagayaki wo sagasu tabi ni deta nda
hitotsu.. futatsu.. hiroiatsumeta
daiji ni daiji ni dakishimeteta kara

夜空を照らして
ずっと笑ってて
「あなたがひとりで歩けますように」

yozora wo terashite
zutto warattete
"anata ga hitori de arukemasu you ni"

今宵も願うの
強くなれココロ
「いつかはふたりで歩けますように」
寄せては返した気まぐれな未来
この路この場所そして私はここにいうよ
足跡残して
「また逢いにくるよ、その時まで…」
またここにくるよ
思い出つないで
また逢える日まで
忘れないで…

koyoi mo negau no
tsuyoku nare KOKORO
"itsuka wa futari de arukemasu you ni"
yosete wa kaeshita kimagure na mirai
kono michi kono basho soshite watashi wa koko ni iru yo
ashiato nokoshite
"mata ai ni kuru yo, sono toki made..."
mata koko ni kuru yo
omoide tsunaide
mata aeru hi made
wasurenaide...

記憶の空に
響いてく言葉
「ありがとう」そして「さよなら」
かけがえのない人…

kioku no sora ni
hibiiteku kotoba
"arigatou" soshite "sayonara"
kakegae no nai hito...


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[info]hallucino
2008-01-13 12:27 pm UTC (link)
>samayoi nagara
join (-nagara form)

>meguri au
join (compound)

>furikaeri nagara
join (-nagara form)

>tadori tsuku
join (compound)

>detanda
the -nda in the end is the soft emphasis particle from the lengthy '(na) no desu'. I separate it since it's effectively a particle and also differentiating between the past tense of b/m/n-ending verb Is

>dakishimete takara
looks like it's actually
dakishimete(')ta kara (the ' if you follow penguin's convention)

>wasurenai de
join (negative -te)

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[info]tsubomi
2008-01-13 06:30 pm UTC (link)
>_x gah... lol xD that's a lot. Well at least two of those I had a thought about (I had 'meguriau' together originally but then got worried and separated it lol -_- such a bad habit).

*Huggles* :D So happy to get a response from you~~~ I've missed you lol. *Pets* Thanks.

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