Chira ([info]halcyonjazz) wrote in [info]albatross_cafe,
@ 2007-06-09 07:19:00
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ch01, 51-54






  • pages 51, 52, 53, and 54 are up

  • added prev-posted designs to GALLERY

  • fanart added in FANWORKS

  • xkcd and Three Panel Soul in LINKS



Thiiis would've come earlier if a sudden bad cold didn't hit me. On the bright side... These pages came out ridiculously well. So!

Though I'm still suspcious that I'm drawing an ellaborate storyboarding project, not a comic.

Site news fairly self explanatory @ update list. But I should mention: I changed the weights a bit of Gain and Reach in keyplayers when I realized I must have made them up drunk cause THEY WERE MUCH TOO LIGHT.




...Well! I guess for bonus this update I decided to show the page process of my fave page? So if you're curious how I draw up the pages:


  1. Look at the script!





  2. First I sketch it out. The starting sketch is VERY messy and pretty much only comprehensible to my eyes (and even then, sometimes... XD). I first add a scribble to either the left or right margin to remind me which said of a hypothetical book it would be on. In this case, scribble is on the left, so it's a right page. I then lay down the panel order/layout, speech bubble locations, and put an extremely rough idea of what I want on the page with a lot of scrawled notes to myself to remind me what that mess of lines is SUPPOSED to represent, or what I want to change upon refining the inking. I very rarely follow 100% exactly what I lay down, as I VERY FREQUENTLY scrap and redo panels four or five times each--not that this page shows that, since it was pretty on the ball.





  3. I create a new layer and nicely set up the layout and speech bubbles. I know a lot of folk put in the speech bubbles last, but I work more comfortably with them there first.





  4. I start lining! This cap has both the quick jot-downs and the more detailed refinement after I go over it. As you can see this is ENTIRELY where I do the actual drawing.





  5. The finished lineart of the page! I add in the black as I go, airbrushing for gradient effect in places. I used to do it on a seperate layer but it turned out to be more trouble.





  6. And the toning. I don't actually spend as much time on toning as I should, since it's the last step of the art and by the time I get there I want to get it done done done. So it's really kinda sloppy. ...I'm always amused when I get complimented on it though.



  7. Aaand then crop, text and resize for site viewing :3


Pretty unexciting isn't it? Well it's something XD







Oh, and some wip work on the redraw of the chapter spread (because it bugs me just That Much):







W-well. Until next week! I mean it???



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[info]sjen
2007-06-09 04:10 pm UTC (link)
Hee, I work the speech bubbles in first too! It seriously helps the compositions of the panels mesh better.

Aaaand he has really big feet, you know what that means...

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[info]halcyonjazz
2007-06-09 10:41 pm UTC (link)
Yes, exactly! It helps me organize placements and composition better rather than just sticking it in.

I'LL LEAVE YOU TO YOUR ASSUMPTIONS

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[info]typewriterink
2007-06-09 04:29 pm UTC (link)
I think I'm first comment just 'cause like... I'm awake at a ridiculous hour on a Saturday?

We'll go with that for 300, Alex~

I loved loved loved the page that you showed the step-by-step to!! Only BFF's!!!!! can have silent conversations that awesome! XPP

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[info]motorbike
2007-06-09 05:12 pm UTC (link)
OH, YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY!

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I'M REPLYING JUST FOR THE ICON, it's been too long!
[info]halcyonjazz
2007-06-09 10:40 pm UTC (link)

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[info]cloen
2007-06-09 06:12 pm UTC (link)
Gain's expressions are priceless XD

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[info]vikalpa
2007-06-09 07:06 pm UTC (link)
Everyone's expressions are SO EXCELLENT oh my gosh I want to icon everything.

I feel I have seen the chapter spread before.

Hahaha, five. I like drawing your dorks, can you tell?

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[info]halcyonjazz
2007-06-09 10:36 pm UTC (link)
I feel I have seen the chapter spread before.

Who knows, I may have shown you in IM? I don't keep track of these things!

AND BY ALL MEANS PLEASE KEEP DOING SO

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[info]marus_puppy
2007-06-09 07:31 pm UTC (link)
Totally worth the wait. Gain is still a beast. XDD

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[info]adesso
2007-06-09 09:55 pm UTC (link)
OH THOSE KIDS AND THEIR HIJINKS. ♥

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[info]halcyonjazz
2007-06-09 10:34 pm UTC (link)
BOY YOU'RE FAST

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[info]adesso
2007-06-10 12:37 am UTC (link)
SOME THINGS JUST CRY FOR IMMEDIATE ICONAGE.

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[info]queen_marshed
2007-06-10 05:08 pm UTC (link)
Progress shots! My fave! :D

Love the layout there girl. :3

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[info]kibo
2007-06-12 11:09 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Love the details and expressions. I'm always amazed at comickers (I have no idea what the term is)and I loove seeing the how the process takes place. Does it take you long to work out an entire layout... thingamabobber?

Er, sorry if I'm not supposed to comment about this here, lol.

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[info]halcyonjazz
2007-06-12 11:50 pm UTC (link)
It takes about fifteen minutes to work out something rough to work out the pacing, and a couple of more to detail out the presentation. The actual time eater is the actual drawing XD

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[info]kikirakikai
2007-07-25 04:14 pm UTC (link)
You might've said it but~~~ what program did you use? D:

Manga Studio?

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[info]halcyonjazz
2007-07-28 09:19 pm UTC (link)
It's in the FAQ! I use Deleter Comicworks. I hear Manga Studio's better though? Maybe? I have no idea XD

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