Dan Goldman ([info]dangoldman) wrote in [info]act_i_vate,
@ 2006-02-16 00:23:00
Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
"Kelly" Part 3


Part 1 Part 2 




























Surely by now I must have mentioned that ALL of "Kelly" to date is also viewable as a Flickr slideshow?

(Post a new comment)


[info]blackrabbitpix
2006-02-16 05:13 am UTC (link)
some very wim wenders-like visual effects.

(Reply to this)


[info]eideteker
2006-02-16 05:36 am UTC (link)
Please enable comments if you post to nycnobody. Also, you might want to explain its relevance to the community.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

[info]dangoldman
2006-02-16 05:46 am UTC (link)
We at ACT-I-VATE are preferring that all the pertinent comments be left on this community's posts, that's why the image is linked/comments disabled.

Explain the relevance... to you? I post comics and/or fiction at nycnobody often and am rather appreciated there, as many of my stories are scrabbling-around-in-NY-muck in nature that fit the ethos behind the community nicely.

Thanks for popping by and spreading the love... Hope to see you around here again next week.

(Reply to this) (Parent)

[info]misfitwes
2006-02-16 05:48 am UTC (link)
this story is becoming fantastic while staying in the gutter. i love it.

(Reply to this)


[info]nemesisbecoming
2006-02-16 06:02 am UTC (link)
Nice intro. NOW is when the real insanity begins. And you don't kid on the Thursday thing. :)

Oh, and that nycnobody thing above makes me chuckle.

(Reply to this)


(Anonymous)
2006-02-16 09:37 am UTC (link)
Excellent pacing, Dan-san.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

[info]rami_efal
2006-02-16 09:38 am UTC (link)
<<< Me.

(Reply to this) (Parent)
hi dan
(Anonymous)
2006-02-16 01:12 pm UTC (link)
Hi Dan,

Been 2 years since we spoke. Still readily enjoying your handywork in my inbox though so many thanks.

Harriet

(neonervosa@aol.com)

(Reply to this)


[info]benchilada
2006-02-16 03:29 pm UTC (link)
So. Freaking. Good.

I want a goddamned Activate collected edition when this is done.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

[info]dangoldman
2006-02-16 05:14 pm UTC (link)
That would be nice, wouldn't it? Keep your fingers crossed and include us in your nightly prayers, holmes.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

[info]fuckin_nice_guy
2006-02-17 03:54 am UTC (link)
Is that a big ol rollin paper
betwixt your finger tips?

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

[info]dangoldman
2006-02-17 02:53 pm UTC (link)
Nope; it's a fortune from the Buddhist temple on the Bowery in Chinatown, NYC. It reads:

"Probability of Success: Excellent.
When you feel exhausted, do go to retire.
When you are hungry, eat what you desire.
You will sure acquire all what you require
For you have the fire that others admire."

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)
Re:
[info]fuckin_nice_guy
2006-02-17 11:59 pm UTC (link)
How poetic!
...retire to your desires...

(Reply to this) (Parent)

[info]man_size
2006-02-16 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Bravo! You gave plausibility as to why the protagonist would consider his options the way he did.

(Reply to this)


[info]gatodesnudo
2006-02-16 11:32 pm UTC (link)
what's up, dan! another great installment, that's what!

(Reply to this)


(Anonymous)
2006-02-17 01:11 am UTC (link)
i was thinking just yesterday how i want to see the next installment.,,,keep up the great work...! t

(Reply to this)

Yeah.
[info]iconotrast
2006-02-17 02:30 pm UTC (link)
What Dean said!

(Reply to this)


(Anonymous)
2006-02-17 10:42 pm UTC (link)
"My name is Prince... and I smell funky..."

I realize this is all fictionalized, but the peek into "Trevor's" habits is doing a number on my head. It's a good thing he looks less like Steve and more like a Bollywood heavy.

(waitasec... "Steve"... "Trevor"? oh you comic book dork, you)

Is that foreshadowing I see on Kelly's face? Oops, no, just jizz.

Ken A.

(Reply to this)


[info]dcwallin
2006-02-18 03:46 am UTC (link)
I'm simultaneously repulsed and intrigued by this Kelly guy. He's like David Lee Roth's sexually ambiguous brother. Nice job of sucking the reader in. Great style too!

(Reply to this)

Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Login w/ OpenID
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…