Pedro Camargo ([info]siliconneedle) wrote in [info]act_i_vate,
@ 2007-01-30 08:02:00
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GLAM part I: Page 22 + 23




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22


23

Sudden chaaaange. Also I realised the text isn't that incredibly clear/readable, sorry about that, I'll try to re-letter it when I get some time and post an updated version in the archive when I dooo...

Also, here's a final reminder; it's THIS Thursday!!!!:


BE THERE~!!!!! I know I shall beeee....

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new pages every Tuesday!!! Enjoy...

need to catch up on the story??? Maybe refresh your memory?????
~Then CLICK HERE: ***GLAM SO FAR...***

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[info]dishliquid
2007-01-30 01:31 pm UTC (link)
As awesome as always. I like this new character you've introduced.

I love the difference in style between the people of New Bad City and the people in Happy Warm Place Land.

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bone
[info]magicgravel
2007-01-30 01:40 pm UTC (link)
This is beginning to remind me of Bone

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Re: bone
[info]siliconneedle
2007-01-30 01:47 pm UTC (link)
haven't read Bone BUT have been meaning to borrow that big collected thing from a friend. From what I've seen of it, didn't seem like my thing...but will give it a try all the same...

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Re: bone
[info]magicgravel
2007-01-30 01:57 pm UTC (link)
it is just a vague similarity. Anachronistic characters, a mix of light heartedness and violence, a journey....

Hopefully your pacing is faster.

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Re: bone
[info]dishliquid
2007-01-30 09:15 pm UTC (link)
But not too fast. Bone spans, like, 20 years, doesn't it?

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[info]bertozzi
2007-01-30 02:05 pm UTC (link)
I love those hills...

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[info]simonfraser
2007-01-30 02:37 pm UTC (link)
Yea me too.

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[info]jerem_morrow
2007-01-30 02:28 pm UTC (link)
Better with each entry.

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[info]benchilada
2007-01-30 04:37 pm UTC (link)
SWITCH UP!
Brilliant.

Also, loved "what little survival instincts they possessed," and "that's because your powers are lacking."

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[info]pseudonymjones
2007-01-30 06:26 pm UTC (link)
Heeh, I really like that the last bubble of narration is changing shape into a normal speech bubble. And now I'm trying to imagine what someone who talking in cursive sounds like. I imagine sort of dreamy and flowing, but Menard doesn't seem like the type. Also, I like his helmet.

Also, hooray Glam can't wait for next week keep up the awesome work etc!

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[info]brianmanton
2007-01-30 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Love it.

The art is starting to remind me of Paul Pope a little, 'specially that second last panel (mean that in a good way, it's still very original looking)

If you are re-lettering (though I could read it fine) you might want to revise the tenses in the narration a little.

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[info]brianmanton
2007-01-30 07:00 pm UTC (link)
Oh yeah, and misterious person #3... Carnivale?

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[info]gdwessel
2007-01-30 07:06 pm UTC (link)
I knew something was up when you changed the pic of Whyte in the title panel. Now we get three new weirdos to keep an eye on. Excellent.

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[info]man_size
2007-01-30 07:06 pm UTC (link)
http://man-size.livejournal.com/263848.html

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[info]cadwell
2007-01-30 11:17 pm UTC (link)
Jeepers! Its all gone different!
Seriously, these are two wonderful pages. The turn back to narration, and unexpected leap into the present (maybe?) has made the previous months of reading feel like nought but an intro to the vast wonders you have in mind. This has got to be the end of Part 1, right?
This twist just confirms my opinion (see here: http://cadwell.livejournal.com/) that Glam is one of the best, most inventive things I'm reading at the moment, on the web or otherwise.
Keep at it Pedro, lives are depending on you, dammit!

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[info]siliconneedle
2007-01-31 03:59 pm UTC (link)
WAUGH!!! Thank you! Top 5?! MADDnESS!!!! I am quite flattered, and I hope you'll continue enjoying the story through all the changes and maddness. And Part 1 is almost over...I considered starting part 2 once they left...but chose to push it further back a bit.

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finally caught up
[info]jahfurry
2007-01-31 07:40 am UTC (link)
MAN!! freeekin breeeeeliant.....
bone sure, but add healthy dollop of woodring, deitch, wonka, seuss and whatever, this stuff is real wangdangdoodle of a read!

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Re: finally caught up
[info]siliconneedle
2007-02-02 05:06 pm UTC (link)
thanks, man, I really appreciate it. Also: was really cool to finally meet you at the party as well.

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[info]steve_fuentes
2007-01-31 09:18 am UTC (link)
I like the new characters, a big change from the last page in styles and feeling. Page 2, panel 1 is great. I just hope the three months isn't real-time.

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[info]siliconneedle
2007-01-31 03:33 pm UTC (link)
it shouldn't be, I don't think, at least if I keep up the two pages a week thing going...(i hope so too...)

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