red wolf ([info]redwolfoz) wrote in [info]30minutemuse,
@ 2004-03-02 20:46:00
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Current mood: pissed off
Current music:nick cave and the bad seeds — red right hand

Tending the Pack
Title: Tending the Pack
Rating: G
Challenge: The Visitor

Tending The PackThe woman with the surgical tweezers dug another pellet out of the wolf's leg. It hit the bowl with a plink and rolled to a stop to join several others.

The wolf was stretched out on the table, her rear right leg was shaved, clearly showing the telltale injuries that had been caused by a peppering of shotgun pellets.

The woman — according to her passport her name was Riordan, but it wasn't the name she was born with, just the latest in a long line of identities — gently cleaned the wounds and bound the leg. Then she carefully carried the wolf and placed her beside the fire before administering the antidote to the anaesthetic.

As the wolf started to come around, she ran her fingers through the thick neck fur, calming the animal with her presence. The wolf relaxed, repositioning herself to lay her head in the woman's lap.

It had been years since anybody from the nearby town had taken pot shots at one of her wolves. The last idiot had been hospitalised for his troubles. As she eyed the cricket bat beside the cabin's door, she could foresee a similar future for the silly bastard who thought shooting wolves was entertaining.

The wolf nudged the woman's leg and was given a handful of kibble and a parting pat.

Getting to her feet, the woman picked up the bat. "There's water by the door and more kibble if you want it. I'll let the rest of the pack know you'll be feeling more yourself in the morning." She let herself out into the cool mountain air.

Striding across the clearing at a determined pace, bat over her shoulder, she chatted in a quiet voice to the wolves, who nuzzled her hand in concern for their missing pack mate. It was a decent trek through the dense scrub that surrounded the cabin, but it would give her time enough to contemplate the pain she was about to inflict on a very stupid human.




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[info]shadowycat
2004-03-02 06:49 am UTC (link)
Now that's a new and different perspective. I'd like to know more about this woman who lives with wolves. Very intriguing piece.

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[info]redwolfoz
2004-03-02 12:57 pm UTC (link)
The challenge gave me a chance to visit an old friend. This is something that's been kicking around in my head for a long time and it finally got to see the warm glow of a monitor.

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[info]00smut
2004-03-02 02:52 pm UTC (link)
Very original, good imagery. Definatley sounds like it could be something out of a bigger story!

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[info]redwolfoz
2004-03-02 03:44 pm UTC (link)
In a way it is from of a bigger story. The character and the cabin existed long before the challenge, just never got around to writing this part before.

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[info]s0nia
2004-03-03 12:39 am UTC (link)
A very intriguing woman and I have no sympathy for the man she is going to tackle. He damn well deserves what comes to him(unless he did it in self-defense, which doesn't seem to be the case here!).

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[info]redwolfoz
2004-03-03 06:55 pm UTC (link)
Rest assured it was not self-defence, it was drunken moron with a gun. And don't think he'll be getting any sympathy from the Sheriff or anyone else in town either. Everyone knows the wolves are protected by law in general and by the woman personally, and that the woman is a close friend of the Sheriff.

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[info]greenstuff
2004-03-05 10:02 pm UTC (link)
That was an intrigueing peice. Good job.

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[info]redwolfoz
2004-03-06 03:06 pm UTC (link)
Many thanks.

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[info]madamsprout
2004-03-07 03:27 pm UTC (link)
Nice job. I would be interested to read more about her. :)

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[info]redwolfoz
2004-03-07 05:43 pm UTC (link)
There are several more short stories featuring her on LiveJournal, and five much longer ones on my site.

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[info]mchoneygoose
2004-03-08 12:26 pm UTC (link)
Woo! Go woman....LOl...actually I'll be checking out the rest of your stuff on LJ if that's okay.

;-)

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[info]redwolfoz
2004-03-08 02:53 pm UTC (link)
Glad you enjoyed. You're more than welcome to check out my LJ, hope you have fun.

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