magi_sammy ([info]magi_sammy) wrote in [info]30_kisses,
@ 2006-05-01 18:02:00
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Silence Heavy As Lead (HiruMamo, Eyeshield 21, #17, kHz)
Title: Silence Heavy As Lead
Author/Artist: magi_sammy
Pairing: Hiruma x Mamori
Fandom: Eyeshield 21
Theme: #17 - kHz
Disclaimer: I want to own Eyeshield 21.  I also want a fountain of strawberries, but that's not happening either.
Notes: This one is actually one of my favorites.  Really, it is.  That's rare for me, because usually my writing turns out to be "err, okay" for me, but this one is actually pretty good.  I like the way I used the theme.  Read away!
Completed: 15/30

Theme 17: kHz

 

Hiruma x Mamori

 

Silence.

 

How do you measure silence?

 

You can measure the speed of sound.  You can almost measure the speed of light.  But you can’t measure the speed of silence.

 

Because silence is just too heavy to even move.

 

And for the first time, Youichi Hiruma was silent.

 

Mamori Anezaki was just as silent.  Her eyes were tearing, but she didn’t dare choke or make a noise to betray her emotions.  The two sat in the front seat of car in a parking lot, not moving.  Both Hiruma and Mamori were staring straight out the window. 

 

A bad fight.  It happens.  But it had been the last straw.  That’s what Mamori had said.  Hiruma had agreed.

 

It was almost official.

 

They just had to say it to make it official.  If they said it, that meant it was true.  If they said it, that meant they admitted it was over.

 

Hiruma and Mamori turned to each other and looked into each other’s eyes.  Both had tried to open their mouths more then a hundred times, but it was impossible.

 

Nothing would come out.

 

The next thing both of them knew, they were locked in a passionate kiss, grasping each other’s waists and shoulders, moving over one another in the car.  Remaining silent the whole time, their mouths moved over one another’s again and again in the finest form of grace and passion.

 

Actions speak louder then words.

End




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[info]muck_a_muck
2006-05-20 10:31 pm UTC (link)
I was just about to have a heart attack over them breaking up... thanks for not doing that! :)

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[info]magi_sammy
2006-05-23 01:40 am UTC (link)
Heh, sorry! ^___^ I would never break up my lovely couple :D

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[info]13mirror
2006-05-21 03:45 pm UTC (link)
Uhu .. me too X( That would've been... phew (been there, done that - flashbacks to own life XP ), anyways... ^^ Thanks!

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[info]magi_sammy
2006-05-23 01:41 am UTC (link)
O___O Such flashbacks must be very scary to have...

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[info]bluwoobelle
2007-06-20 05:25 am UTC (link)
I'm in the same boat, I could have sworn that their relationship was over. Way to lead one way and turn it around. The ending made me happy. Thanks for yet another great story.

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[info]sellega
2008-03-09 01:19 pm UTC (link)
This was really good. I got all tense just reading it! My only criticism is the very beginning. The sentences about measuring silence seem unconnected. The bit about Hiruma being silent for the "first time" is also strange. That aside, I enjoyed the rest. :)

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