one-time queen of hearts ([info]lady_stargazer) wrote in [info]30_kisses,
@ 2006-03-24 10:54:00
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A Collection of All Themes in Miniature [Fruits Basket] [Kyo/Uo] [Themes #1 through #30]
[Title] A Colletion of All Themes in Miniature
[Author] [info]lady_stargazer
[Series] Fruits Basket
[Pairing] Uotani Arisa/Sohma Kyo
[Themes] All - #1 through #30
[Word Count] 30x30... *scrambles for calculator* So, 900.
[Rating] PG, definitely nothing questionable in these.
[Disclaimer] Fruits Basket belongs to Natsuki Takaya.

[Notes] For [info]30_kisses. These tried to kill me, as I said before. Each theme response is only 30 words long. I thought it would be a cute gimmick to start off with, then it ended up FREAKING IMPOSSIBLE and it wasn't so cute anymore. It was really, really hard. I'm not exactly happy with a lot of them, but I did the best I could with such a miniscule word count. Anyway, here are my 30 kisses 30s, as I dubbed them. THEY TRIED TO KILL ME. Most of them blow. But I did it! It CAN be done! (Just not well).



1. Look Over Here

Uo hates attention, but her long legs, sun-kissed-blonde hair and heart-stopping eyes scream ‘look over here!’.

Kyo’s eyes trace her every movement hopelessly, helplessly. Uo both hates and loves it.

2. News; Letter

She’s started the letter four hundred times – “Dear Kyo”… The next words are ‘I haven’t seen you in years and I miss you’, signed with a kiss, but she just can’t.

3. Jolt!

Both Uo and Kyo are adrenaline junkies – they live for life’s thrills, risks and rollercoasters, kissing the sky.

But Uo doesn’t like the jolt she feels when their hands touch.

4. Our distance and that person

Uo understands that she cannot compete with Tohru. The Yankee – coarse, unfeminine, too tall - will always be beaten by her petite stature, smile like sunlight and soft, unsure kisses.

5. “ano sa…” Hey, you know

Kyo says ‘I love you’ the same way he says everything – nonchalant and gruff. Uo tells him not to be so sappy, but kisses him when she sees no-one’s looking.

6. The space between dreams and reality

In his dreams, the Yankee kisses him with passion and abandon, mouth pliant against his; soft in his arms.

The next day, in school, Kyo can never look at her.

7. Superstar

“She was the girl with the superstar smile, and everyone loved her.”

Uo can’t believe she’s delivering Tohru’s eulogy. Kyo touches her arm comfortingly and the sunlight kisses her coffin.

8. Our Own World

They go into their own world when they fight – it’s just the two of them and this anger.

[Uo never, ever wonders if his mouth could kiss as well as it yells.]

9. Dash

Uo’s not the girly flirtatious type, but Kyo sometimes looks at her in a way that makes her want to run so he can follow and catch her, and then...

10. #10

They have called each other names ten times today.

He pushes her up against her locker, kisses her hard, slow. Her blood throbs in her veins. Time number one. Beginnings.

11. Gardenia

He surprises her with a single gardenia on White Day, even though her Valentine’s chocolate was horrible. The soft white petals are kissed with pink at the tips. It is beautiful.

12. In a Good Mood

He can always tell when she’s in a good mood because she hums, so he knows it’s okay to sneak up behind her and plant a kiss on her cheek.

13. Excessive Chain

Uo gazes at Kyo, who’s mooning over Tohru (blind to Hana’s stare); Momiji watches Haru as he daydreams about Yuki-kisses, he has eyes only for Tohru, a chain leading nowhere.

14. Radio-cassette player

The first time he heard her sing - along with some song on the radio about honeyed kisses - he teased her silly, even though it was pleasant and tuneful.

15. Perfect Blue

Kyo would never say ‘your eyes are ocean-blue’, but once he bought her a sky-blue pendant, told her it matched her eyes, and kissed her clumsily, and that was better.

16. Invincible; unrivalled

This man, who plays endless games of catch with their son, and kisses their daughters goodnight, is so different to that headstrong teenager who wanted only to defeat his cousin.

17. kHz (kilohertz)

On the one hand, abandoning their studying in favour of passionate kisses is going to mean she will fail the science test tomorrow.

On the other hand, she doesn’t care.

18. “Say ahhh…”

“Orangey, I want to know how this tastes! Open up!”

The spoon is in his mouth before he can object. Later, he is violently ill. She apologises with a kiss.

19. Red

His eyes have always fascinated her – never before has she seen scarlet like them. She wishes she was brave enough to ask him to leave them open when they kiss.

20. The road home

Before, he was never anxious to return after long training retreats. However, now he knows she is waiting for him with a welcome-home kiss, the journey home is much sweeter.

21. violence; pillage; plunder; extortion

They punch as fast as they kiss. He holds back and she wishes he wouldn’t. They are angry at each other, Akito, the world. Always, she cries at the end.

22. cradle

He rocks the cradle with one foot, kisses his daughter’s forehead softly. She can’t believe he’s free, and they are together. Their daughter has hair like burnt gold.

23. candy

The night he’s locked away, she makes her first-ever batch of candies. Angel kisses, they’re called. They’re bitter, sour, ruined, but she eats every one, and weeps over his photograph.

24. good night

Like him, she sleeps on the roof. The cool night air touches her skin softly, a caress, and, ahead, the stars spread out like a roadmap to paradise. She understands.

25. fence

They have erected necessary barriers. They are afraid.

“Don’t lock yourself away,” Tohru tells them each softly, separately, and kisses them both, and hopes they can let each other in.

26. if only I could make you mine

He wants to write his name on Uo, wants to burn his brand onto her with kisses, wants to own her as much as she doesn’t want to be owned.

27. overflow

Sometimes she feels so full of horrible things that she could explode. It is then she hits him. He holds her wrists fast and kisses her hard, until she forgets.

28. wada calcium CD3

Tohru suffers a manic vitamin-buying phase. Kyo donates the calcium to Uo – he drinks enough milk and he wants her to be able to grow model-tall. She kisses him, touched.

29. the sound of waves

It’s so soppy she would never admit it, but she likes the sound of waves kissing the beach (their beach), the timbre of his voice, the steadiness of his heartbeat.

30. kiss

“Hold still, Yankee!”

“Or what?”

“I’ll miss. Now hold still or I will PHYSICALLY HOLD YOUR HEAD STILL.”

“Who says you get to kiss me anyway? YOU hold still!”

“…”



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[info]lilapriceless
2006-03-24 11:11 am UTC (link)
*SQUEE* I love Kyo/Uo. As much as I love Kyoru, I think he and Uo are a better pairing. Thank you for writing this. It made my morning!

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-24 11:16 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! ♥

I actually do like Kyoru too, I just prefer Kyo/Uo. I think they probably are more suited, in a strange way.

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[info]aurora_twilight
2006-03-24 05:05 pm UTC (link)
Wow I bet they did try and kill you! O.o I'm impressed that you managed to stick with it all! Even though they were short I loved them all and they seemed to flow very nicely together. =) They were all very beautiful, excellent job! Incidentally this was my first time reading Kyo/Uo and I'm very glad that I read your work!

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-24 06:33 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so, so much! ♥ I'm very flattered at such high praise.

Keep exploring Kyo/Uo! We could always use more people who are into the pairing ^^

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[info]songohan_83
2006-03-24 06:40 pm UTC (link)
Kyo and Uo are the perfect volatile match for each and I think you took them through a nice range of events that showed that. You did a great job on this, short but good and very touching.

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-24 07:05 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very, very much. ♥

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[info]slytherisa
2006-03-24 08:18 pm UTC (link)
Wow, what a cool idea! I'd never be able to limitmyself to thirty words, ever. xP

I've also never read Kyo/Uo before, but I really enjoyed your 30s! The one for "Kiss" was a great way to end the set.

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-24 11:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! ♥

It was *awful* trying to limit myself to 30 words each time - I'm wordy, long-winded and rambling. Getting a story across takes me forever, I'm useless at being succint.

This has been a couple of people's first taste of KyoUo, I'm really glad! I hope everyone goes on to read more of the pairing and write some fic of their own.

Oh, and MASSIVE ICON LOVE!

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[info]liri42
2006-03-25 04:04 pm UTC (link)
I remember thinking these two would be a good match during one of their bickering matches in the anime, but I'd never really read any fic with them. I love what you did with them here. (Especially that last one.)

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-25 07:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! ♥ I'm glad you liked them.

Unfortunately, fic for this pairing is surprisingly thin on the ground. And *good* fic for them... Yeah. Really really rare. To the extent that I've begun writing mediocre fic for them for myself.

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[info]klove0511
2006-03-26 05:47 am UTC (link)
I adore Kyo/Uo! I read a really good one once... And for the life of me can't remember what it was.... lol ^_^ But yes, your 30s weer awesome! Number seven was really sad though... with Tohru's eulogy... *sniff* Great job.

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-26 08:49 am UTC (link)
Thank you, dear!

If you ever remember that fic... Be sure to tell me! Because I could really do with a good Kyo/Uo to read.

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[info]lucindathemaid
2006-03-26 01:23 pm UTC (link)
Oh my God... ohmygodohmygodohmygod...

A while ago, Kyo/Uo was one of my favorite pairings, but it eventually got stale after the manga's introduction of Kureno. But with these fics, I do believe I've been lured back into the pairing.

Wow.

I think it's awesome how you managed to condense a theme, a kiss, and spot-on characterization into each ficlet. It definitely sounds like a challenge, but it's one you rose up to masterfully. These were awesome.

I think number eight my my favorite. A bit humorous, a bit coarse, but lovely all the same. Twenty-three really tugged at my heartstrings. And the final one was just the perfect way to end the fic.

Thank you so much for writing, and congrats on completing all thirty! These were wonderful. *bows* ^__^

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-26 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Gosh, thank you! ♥ I'm very flattered.

This was kind of an underground pairing (at least to me) from the very beginning, but yes, ever since Kureno was introduced and Kyo/Tohru became apparent the fanbase for them seemed to shrink even more. However, even with these developments, they are still my OTP. You just need a talent for ignoring canon!

And you say these have lured you back in? ...if you ever write any fic for them, I'd love to see it. Fic for them is so hard to find! ^^

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[info]umadoshi
2006-03-26 01:28 pm UTC (link)
That was a neat approach! Arisa and Kyo are a lot of fun together, and you caught them really well. ^_^

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[info]lady_stargazer
2006-03-26 05:21 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much. ♥ That is a lovely icon!

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[info]wolf_crossbreed
2006-03-27 01:54 am UTC (link)
i really like how you did this challenge. i know i would have given up doing something like this at theme #2. i admire your persistence at finishing your couple like this. as many have said before, this is the first time ive read a kyo/uo story. although i prefer kyo/tohru, i can still read a kyo/uo. im a fan of non-canon pairings(although my fave non-canon pairing is haru/tohru)

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[info]alodial_impresa
2007-04-05 12:47 am UTC (link)
I gotta give you some crit, even though I liked this a lot. Maybe it's just my opinion, because I think that there was a lot about kisses. Just thinking about it, there are a lot of challenges with the word "kiss" in it at least. Try and vary the gesture of love more; I really liked #25 and #7 really hooked me onto this. Way to go.

This is how furuba was suppose to end, with Uo and Kyo together (and Tohru helping them out). Your determination (30 30s) is cool. Very original. And you SURVIVED. I adore Kyo/Uo because it just works so much. Thank you for making this!

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[info]ihateromeo
2007-09-01 03:25 am UTC (link)
Very cute.

"19. Red

His eyes have always fascinated her – never before has she seen scarlet like them. She wishes she was brave enough to ask him to leave them open when they kiss."

This one stood out to me.

Absolutely gorgeous and admirable, these things are.

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[info]fr0z3n_4ng3i_
2007-10-25 11:24 pm UTC (link)
Number 30 HAS to be my favorite!! <3 I'm not a HUGE fan of this coupling but I do enjoy them and I thought you did brilliantly for thirty words each. That would definately kill me o.O

Keep up the good work with all your future writing projects =3

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[info]kumquatxxi
2007-12-26 02:24 pm UTC (link)
This was terribly good! I adore this pairing, and I'm so glad to see the fandom alive. ^^ My only concrit is that occasionally their relationship seemed a little sappy, but you did get it right the majority of the time - #30 really captured everything in their relationship. And to write this whole thing with only thirty-words per piece is an amazing feat, you should be proud! ^^

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