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The Storm

  • May. 14th, 2009 at 11:11 PM

The first thunderstorm of the season was approaching as she walked along the shore of her lake. The air was still, yet heavy with the promise of rain. Not a creature stirred knowing of the impending downpour.

She was able to feel the electricity in the air as a snap and could even smell it. In the distance, thunder rolled and she could see the lightning play between the black clouds that seemed to hang oh, so close to the earth.

A light breeze sprung up stirring the long grasses and moving the new spring leaves, bringing with it the scent of rain. The air cooled causing her to wrap her cloak around her with a delightful shiver down her spine. It was still silent other than the breeze playing amongst the branches and whistling in her ear.

Untitled Start

  • Feb. 9th, 2009 at 12:21 PM

 It messes me up sometimes when I think of getting in other people's minds. I mean, consider - you might feel that tapping into the passion of one of the lesbian partners in Apt. 2G while her and her partner are making love would be revealing. Wouldn't you be excited to know that you are pleasuring another in a way that only one of the same sex could know? Wouldn't your emotions and sensations reach a point where there would be no words to describe them, solely from knowing how and where to caress, to stroke, to touch? Wouldn't you want to experience this first hand? 


Then you touch the partner's mind and get the boredom and the, 'I wonder what's on 20/20 tonight?' from her thoughts.


Or let's jump to 7B. Only she is home right now, in the kitchen, in the dark, leaning over the sink. After a moment she turns off the cold water, and presses the soaked cloth to her face, to her left eye. She wouldn't be going out much, until the discoloration fades. And the pain is strong, a wave of aches from her face, her arms, her breast. But worse is the pain from inside, and the numbness that keeps her around. This is sad, here, and is a part of the messes me up I feel at times.


But wait. We can continue in a bit - my caretaker is here to give me my sponge-bath and to check the tubes.

The Hunt


Through midnight streets he ran, his footsteps echoing crazily from the towering buildings around him.  He slowed for a moment to listen and heard faintly the baying and howling of the pack in pursuit.  With a gulp of air, he sped up again.

As he ran, unbidden, the events that got him here flashed through his mind.  He didn’t need to push.  The buy was going smoothly enough, but he had given the mind of the gang leader a nudge, to force the price a fraction higher.  His mental thrust had been noticed by a little man at the back of the room and if he hadn’t felt the man’s reaction and seen at that moment his intention to raise the alarm, he wouldn’t have got out at all.

For a moment he imagined the leader’s face as he turned and bolted for the door.  What was this crazy behaviour?  The confusion behind him was palatable.  Then the rage as the little man gave warning.  The rage and the hunger for revenge.

Whatever happened to 13 Lines!?

  • Dec. 31st, 2008 at 9:42 PM
Err,

   Did I scare everybody away?  

Happy new year guys!

If I said or did anything to offend you I opologize unequi-vocally.   Please come back and post your lines (13 of them), I promise only to say nice things this time...    Is there an emoticon for crossed fingers?   (;<

Len

Whatever happened to 13 Lines!?

  • Dec. 31st, 2008 at 9:42 PM
Err,

   Did I scare everybody away?  

Happy new year guys!
If I said or did anything to offend

Oct. 28th, 2008

  • 9:23 AM

            Disruption can occur from reasons known or unknown, and can happen at any time. Take the undulating 5000. It worked the airless satellite's surface, slowly easing along doing its job of singing into the soil and stone under its flow tread, occasionally searing a gaze into the ground when hearing odd densities. The data from the song and from analyzing the wavelengths of the vapors from its gaze was sent back to the Gatherer; it was routine, but it was the job it had been built and trained to do. Analyzing and exploring airless satellites and worlds for resources was dry work, however essential. There was little to disrupt programmed work rhythms on landscapes such as this. Nothing exciting had ever turned up on its explorations to activate its base judgment programs. Indeed, it had worked the job for so long without incident that its contemplative intelligence overlays forgot that those program threads existed.

            The 5000 undulated along the relatively even surface of the collapsed tube sending back the data from its constant assessment. Ahead of it, somewhat to the side, a density aberration echoed in the song, getting its attention. Turning to the source, it scanned more precisely, using a frequency adjustment to get a better sense of the situation.

Oasis 2

  • Oct. 11th, 2008 at 7:44 AM
Somewhere in the Australian desert there is a small fissure. From one end water bubbles up from a crack and flows down a rocky slope before pooling in a sandy basin the the far end. Around the pool trees grow. These are small and stunted creatures, a lack of good soil and the occasional sand storm ensure they will never raise their heads above the fissure's top.

I am sitting beneath the trees. Above me the sun shines in a blue sky, but I am protected by the leaves above so only a dappling of light plays across the ground around me. A gentle susurrus from the trees as the wind moves through them and the tintinnabulation of the stream as it follows its rocky path are the only sounds. In the morning and evening I am greeted by bird calls, the only creatures that find it worth the effort to come to this far away spot. It is all incredibly beautiful and peaceful here. I hate it.

Run Away

  • Oct. 8th, 2008 at 6:44 PM
The night had been chilly and long and yet much too short.  Two more hours of the cold and Ada didn't think she would be watching the sky change from pre-dawn gray to the first blush of blue.  She wondered how much longer before she began to fade.  This letting go of life was not as easy as she'd thought. 

Her mind was willing, but her body fought.  Harlan would have chuckled and agreed.

The hush that comes at daybreak lay over the forest, a twitter in the air, a listing of moments, waiting for the sun to peek over the hill.  Hunger had left her yesterday, thank the spirits.  Her rumbling stomach had scared away the birds several times, and watching them brought her a quiet contentment.  The growing thirst was an annoyance, drawing her out of peaceful daydreams to stark reality.  She hoped as she weakened to lose that annoyance, too. 

The sun brightened the forest, illumining the leaves in iridescent green, chasing shadows, bringing birdcalls.

A sudden silence roused her.  The early morning light had brightened to midday during her musings.  The forest hushed, waiting for that which did not belong to reveal itself.

Ada gathered the tattered remnants of her magic.  "Don't see me, don't see me, don't see me," she murmured.  She drew herself in, imagining herself as part of the oak tree she leaned against, her skin the crackled thick bark, her hair dead leaves clinging.  Her sight distorted, the spell bringing a veil over her vision.

Oasis 1

  • Oct. 7th, 2008 at 11:12 PM
First let me tell you where I am.  Not precisely where I am because the reason I am here is to hide.  But letting you know my position within a thousand K radius isn’t going to hurt.  I am in the middle of the Australian desert.  There is a spot with a small billabong - just enough water to keep a dozen or so trees alive and the occasional really desperate kangaroo or camel.  They have to be desperate since there is nothing around my waterhole but sand.  Sure once every ten or so years the rains come and the desert blooms, but I wouldn’t be betting survival on one good year in ten if I were a herbivore.  That’s why this water is the last resort.  The animals know it’s there but they have to be really desperate before they risk the trek out here.

The same goes for me too really.

Acolyte

  • Oct. 2nd, 2008 at 9:01 AM


He was naked as a newborn, save for the emerald ring on the middle finger of his left hand. Light from the green stone pulsed like a metronome.   He knew nothing, possessed nothing, other than a sixth sense born of the regression process.   A vague sense of imminent danger caused him to step back several paces.   Twenty yards ahead the air shimmered; looking down he saw the writhing tendrils laid to ensnare him.   He knew the danger, without recalling a similar encounter, somewhere back in the future.   He watched as the tendrils retracted and stored the memory, first of many.

“Be wary boy!    This is the lair of the Gyrax, she has been here since the dawn of time and is not particular who or what she eats.”   The boy turned, surprised by a grey bearded man who had appeared beside him without warning. 

“Who are you,” he demanded, showing no fear, exuding a confidence he didn’t feel.

“Would you be seeking employment?” the old man replied ignoring both the question and his nakedness.   “I have need of an acolyte.   An apprentice to fetch, carry and assist me in the performance of my craft.  In return, I will provide food shelter and teach you all I know of the Forbidden Arts.”

“Forbidden, by whom?”

The girl who sings the moon into the sky

  • Sep. 30th, 2008 at 1:25 PM

Once there was a girl named Lala, who lived with her Papa in a small cottage in a clearing in the woods. On her fourth birthday, the trees started singing to her. They didn't sing every night, only those nights when the Great Wolf swallowed the moon so the sky was dark as dark ever was and not a breath of wind tickled a blade of grass.

'And what do they tell you?' Papa asked.

'That I'm theirs and they want me to come to them,' she said.

'Why do they want you to come to them?' Papa asked her once.

Lala shrugged and tossed a handful of feed to the chickens. 'I don't know.'

Papa's dark, troubled eyes stared hard at the trees, as if he could penetrate through their thick shadows to the heart of the forest itself. Then his large, gentle hands cupped her small face and he said, 'Promise me you'll never go into the forest before you know why they call you?'


No more schedule

  • Sep. 25th, 2008 at 2:36 PM
if you have a story ready, put it up, whenever you have it. Use some common sense though -- if there are, say, 3 posts for the day re-consider about maybe leaving it till the next day.
Don't spam the comm, leave a few days or so between your own posts and I'd still advise against putting up works which aren't finished but that's each person's own call.

No more schedules. Post when you have them. Effective immediately.

As always, keep the commentary civil and constructive; moderators will periodically scan through the comment sections to ensure civility is maintained.

value of workshops

  • Sep. 22nd, 2008 at 11:41 PM

Dean Wesley Smith shares some thoughts on what he thinks the value of worshops are to writers. And crit groups of various kinds, etc, would fall into this category as well. worth reading.

A story I enjoyed writing.

  • Sep. 20th, 2008 at 6:10 PM

Foxy Magic
 
  I was on my way home from work.   It was dusk; I was cold, and looking forward to a hot dinner.   I was driving on autopilot, my mind on mutton stew.
 
Suddenly I saw two eyes, like burning coals, closing rapidly on the road ahead.   I stamped on the brakes and pumped hard. Then I felt the impact.
 
God I’ve hit something.  It might be a dog.   Somebody’s pet? 
 I pulled into the lay-by and viewed the damage, a shattered bumper that would cost me plenty. I walked back to the still form lying in the road, it was a fox.  
 
I could see the headlights of another vehicle approaching, so I grabbed its ruff and the root of its tail and dragged it onto the grass verge beside the road.   I sat on the kerb, shaken, and angry.   My inattention had cost the vixen her life. 
 
What if it had been a child?
 
I heard rustling in the bushes and turned, to see four tiny eyes looking back at me, burning brightly in the glare of the passing headlights. The car roared by and I sat motionless for several moments. Watching as two tiny cubs waddled from the trees to nuzzle the dead vixen.   They started to suckle and I felt a lump in my throat.   My eyes filled with tears, what had I done?   I’d killed their mother and doomed them to certain death.
 
I pulled myself together and took out the remains of my lunch, a corned beef sandwich, I started to break off pieces and throw them towards the cubs.   One turned its nose up in disgust and walked away.   The other ate with gusto.
  
Ridiculous!    Did I think one corned beef sandwich would save them from their fate?

One with Stone

  • Sep. 18th, 2008 at 11:47 PM
He wandered slowly up the wind-torn hillside. His gaze focused on the boulders which ringed the peak, his feet remained confident on the path. The stones looked worn, tired as the years wore them down. A hundred years has changed so little. But the scars were as fresh as the morning dawn.

A rustle caused him to pause, cautious, then amused to find a snake consuming a field mouse. He rested a hand on the snake and sang with it for a moment. Rising refreshed, he danced lightly up the path, pleased to find life in this barren place.

His stride slowed when he neared the overlapping stones creating a natural arbor. He paused here, remembering the platinum hair swinging round her shoulders; the frightened look in her silver eyes as the judgement sank in. He ducked his head, then joined the harsh wind in song for a moment. The entrance beckoned him.

Point of Entry

  • Sep. 15th, 2008 at 8:39 PM
Stefanie rose instantly with the first moan of system alarm, then fell back with a groan as the sound resolved into the chirp-whoop pattern of Collision Alarm. She planned to kill Frank for running a drill just hours after she collapsed into bed. It was his emergency she worked overtime on, he knew better than to pull this crap today.

All irritation vanished with the shudder of impact. Gravity failed entirely as a barrage of new alarms started singing. She bounced off the personal cabinets and up against the wall.

Stefanie jumped to her feet and ran seconds after gravity asserted itself. The environmental panel by the crew quarters door showed green; oxygen good, no ruptures. She waved override on the caution and raced down the conduit.

Mind Your Own Business.

  • Sep. 12th, 2008 at 12:07 PM

MYOB
 
Evelyn watched through the curtains.   For two years Jon Ellery had been letting out rooms on the second and third floor of his town house, just across the road.  It had always been a quiet suburb, an area noted for its affordable accommodation. 
 
 Jon was a nice young man, neat and tidy, kept himself to himself and never caused any trouble…
 
 She’d watched them arrive, bright eyed students eager to graduate with honours from the local University. 

  Her nose wasn’t always stuck to the parlour window, not like some she could mention.   She was too busy getting on with her own life to watch the comings and goings of others.  
 
 Her nose moved even closer to the window, as a procession of body bags were taken from the house to a large black mortuary van.   Her eyes teared up, as two pale emaciated victims were stretchered to a waiting ambulance.  Finally, Ellery appeared in the doorway secured by two hefty police officers.
 
She’d prided herself on being a good neighbour, she didn’t fuss and she didn’t pry.   What manner of atrocities had Jon Ellery perpetrated, just across the road, safe in the knowledge that English people can be relied upon to mind their own business.

Shasta on Seriova (New beginning)

  • Sep. 9th, 2008 at 9:23 PM
It wasn't the first time Shasta noticed the lack of personal effects in Ray's office. Most of the other personnel on Seriova used their office space as a sort of retreat, filled with keepsakes, slideshows of family, a holographic display of their favorite Earth spot--anything to avert homesickness.

"You're in danger of being sent home, Lieutenant McCabe," Ray said.

"Again?"

He dismissed her sarcasm with a wave of his hand. "I'm serious."

"So am I," she replied. "We've been over it time and again. Psych cleared me."

"Yeah, that inspires me with confidence." He tapped his fingers on his desk.

His fingers were slim and elegant, the nails neatly trimmed. His fingers stilled. She looked up and met his icy blue gaze.

"You're not doing those kids any favors by being so easy on them, Lieutenant. The sooner they adapt to our culture, the better off they'll be," he said.

"I happen to think they'll accept our culture better if we don't try to shove it down their gullets. Captain."

Sep. 8th, 2008

  • 7:31 AM

            As the transcar slowed, approaching dock, Joel Nelson's HoloAlert! blasted on startling him. Annoyed, Nelson slapped the wrist unit into silence, standing to cross over to the port iris. With the station Sups on his case lately about his tardiness he kept the alarm active, usually shutting it off before he caught the transcar for work. He just wasn't all focused with things today -- this week ended his current term of duty. And, knowing his crazy friends, his co workers, Nelson had to be wary. In three days he'd be on the Earthbound heading home, and any time during those three days they could get him, pranksters that they are. Also, even with his shift shorter this month with his leaving, today was the beginning of his dig rotation. After three years on the job this first day in still made him uneasy. It was the part of the job he didn’t think he could ever really get comfortable with.
            There was just something about having his mind put into a mining robot that bothered him.
           
            Nelson thumbed the DNA security lock on the entrance to Excavation Control. The door swished open and he stepped inside to an argument. 

September schedule

  • Sep. 3rd, 2008 at 9:54 PM

8 -[info]will_couvillier

10 -[info]musingaloud

12 -[info]len_morgan

 15 -[info]jorhett

 17 -[info]jorhett

 

that's all this month, so from the 18th till end of Septh may as well be open month. Brian will take care of schedules for Oct, unless he can't in which case Justin will do so.