Nu ([info]quiet_rebel) wrote in [info]100_ghosts,
@ 2008-03-31 16:04:00
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Prompt: Forbidden Fruit
A Fair Trade
PG
Jo/find out for yourself :D



Two weeks ago, Jo got into the Impala with Sam.

On the fifteenth day, he said, “Why are you still here?”

She shrugged. “You haven’t asked me to leave yet.”

Day 21 Jo straddled Sam in the front seat of the Impala. She stuck her tongue down his throat and tasted him. Her fingers brushed against the scar tissue, where his tattoo used to be.

Sam’s eyes flashed black. She could still see the sadness behind the dark.

“You had to save him,” she whispered.

But no matter how many times she said it, Dean never seemed to believe her.




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[info]jamiesspawn
2008-03-31 08:21 pm UTC (link)
That? Even better than it sounded in my head. I mean. Dude. ;) I love how you cram so much into so little words.

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[info]oh_mcgee
2008-03-31 08:37 pm UTC (link)
O_O

Holy Cow. This? Is uhmazing.

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[info]iamstealthyone
2008-03-31 09:05 pm UTC (link)
This made me all thinky. :) Yikes on the things these boys do to/for each other.

Nicely done.

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[info]nativestar
2008-03-31 09:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh! For a second I didn't get it, then it clicked and - WOW.

I love it when a drabble does that to you. Very nicely done. :)

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[info]nephthys101
2008-03-31 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Well done, just like a horror movie.

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[info]december21st
2008-04-01 01:48 am UTC (link)
Ooooooooooooooooh.

Wicked cool.

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[info]brin_bailey
2008-04-05 10:12 pm UTC (link)
Dude.

I had to read this twice before I got it. It's pretty "Wow."

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[info]miconic
2008-04-06 04:17 am UTC (link)
That is cool. Definitely one of the best reads I've read lately, and it still leaves a lot to the reader. Well done. Thanks for sharing the read.

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